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Subject: 2nd request, pls advise -- Re: request for published correction re: factual error

From: Peter Heimlich <peter.heimlich@gmail.com >


To: newsdesk@independent.co.uk
Date: Tue, 5 Mar 2019 07:19:43 -0500

On 2/23/2019 7:21 AM, Peter Heimlich wrote to: newsdesk@independent.co.uk

To whom it may concern:

This is me http://tinyurl.com/yybug3me

I caught a factual error and a grammar typo in this article


https://www.independent.co.uk/life-style/super-bowl-2019-audi-cashew-advert-
commercial-twitter-la-rams-new-england-patriots-53-a8761571.html

Factual error: In the advert, the co-worker performed a chest thrust, not my dad's
namesake under-the-ribcage abdominal thrust. It's an innocent error, however, per my
blog http://www.the-sidebar.com/2019/02/audi-superbowl-tv-commercial-
features.html there's a big difference, so I'm respectfully requesting a published
correction.

Grammar typo: Should be "as a co-worker performs..."

Incidentally, in the article if you click the link to your reporter's Twitter, you'll see her
account has been suspended https://twitter.com/KatieOMalley_

Thanks for taking a look and I look forward to a reply.

Cheers, Peter

Peter M. Heimlich
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website: http://medfraud.info
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