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I am recently graduated, I want to pursue my higher studies.

I have searched for an extra courses


to enrich and update my background education to strengthen my abilities in mechanical field
and recognize the important aspects of the materials used in modern engineering applications,
but most sites that give good courses require to pay a fee to get the certificate.
I didn’t have a job yet and the family income is low, in addition to my need to this mechanical
courses and the English language courses to improve my skills either to get a career or to have
opportunity to finish my master degree.
For the reasons that mentioned above I need the financial aid to access the world’s best
education, universities and instructors. I will dedicate myself and commit to finish all the
courses that I will enrol in it and try to get the educational benefits to have a tangible career.

How will taking this course help you achieve your career goals?
The certificate would be a valuable thing for me because it will help me a lot to update my
mechanical background, also to get better job opportunities and start my career as fast as
possible
This course Mechanics of Material explores the analysis and design of thin-walled pressure
vessels and engineering structures torsion in mechanical engineering so that will help me to
improve my skills and learn new things in new way with new instructors.
This courses in mechanical engineering and english language that I want to get, I think it will
open a window of chances to get a career or pursue the higher studies and ease the way through
the studying abroad.
To step forward and achieve my goal I must develop my skills and make progress in my
experience by take additional courses and Coursera provide the access to the best world
universities especially Georgia Institute of Technology so I really need these courses to
accomplish the dream.

‫ الفرق بين ال‬Statement of Purpose (SOP) ‫و‬Personal Statement (‫ مهم جدا عند التقديم للمنح ترفقهن‬as
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Statement of Purpose (SOP) – Just by looking at the title, we should already know that this
paper is focused on your purpose, or the reasons why you want to study a particular
course/major at this university. Usually, schools will assign what they call “prompts,” which
are focused questions which you need to answer in detail. Failure to answer the question
automatically marks you as an unfit candidate. It is very important to direct your response to
the particular questions at hand. Don’t go off topic and start talking in detail about your past
achievements, hopes, or dreams. Effective SOP writing discusses your career plan and future
goals. This must be well thought out, as it takes focus and determination to pursue a degree,
especially if you are applying for a master’s or doctorate degree. The admissions committee
wants to see how well organized and prepared you are. Your readers need to know that you are
serious about the degree program. They do not want slackers; they want well-defined research
interests. A well-written SOP formally expresses the candidate’s background (education,
interests, credentials, etc.), but the candidate does not brag. The candidate explains in detail his
or her desire to gain acceptance into the program of choice.

Personal Statement – The keyword “personal” already tells you how different this is from an
SOP. Here is your chance to show off what you have accomplished in your academics, any
major skills you have, and any extracurricular activities in which you have participated. In this
paper, you have the chance to represent yourself to stand out from the other students; you have
the freedom to talk about anything and everything in your life, as long as it is relevant to the
program to which you are applying. A common mistake with this type of document is that some
applicants have too much to say, and they do not know how to choose relevant details or
transition fluidly from idea to idea. Jumping from one story to another in one paragraph will
put off the admissions committee, so organize your thoughts in advance. Plan what you want
to write and structure your essay logically. Most importantly, don’t lie! The best personal
statements are straightforward, reflective, and honest, so don’t overthink the task. Just express
yourself

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