Statement 1

This research aims to find out what people think about television.
Questions.

 Who watches has vested interests in such a research?

 What is the research about?
 Where does the research take place?
 When is the period for the research?
 Why this research?

Improved statement.
This research aims to show the importance of television in the lives of people who use it and the effects of
its absence in their lives.

Statement 2
My study is to some research into HIV disease to find out what people do when their relatives have it and
what support they can get and how nurses deal with it
Questions

 Who are those concerned by this study?

 What is the effect of HIV on those infected?
 Where is the study going to be held?
 When is the perfect for this study?
 Why do people react differently to those infected with HIV?

Statement 3.
I want to find out how many of the local residents are interested in a play scheme for children during
X’mas holidays.
Problem.
The statement does not factor the parents and guardians of these children.
Questions

 Who are the most important people in this study

 What is the impact of such a study?
 Where would be suitable for such a study?
 When would the study be proper?
 Why such a play scheme during X’mas?
Improved Statement.
I want to find out how many children are interested in a play scheme during X’mas holidays.