Writing Sentences

14 March 2019.
1. Myka sang, it surprised her mother.
2. It surprised her mother, Myka sang.
3. Myka sang surprising her mother.
4. Myka´s singing surprised her mother.
5. Surprising her mother, Myka sang.
6. When Myka sang, it surprised her mother.
7. If myka sings, it surprises her mother.
8. Myka, surprising her mother, sang.
9. Myka´s mother was surprised by her singing.
10. Surprising her mother Myka sang.
Non-hibakusha employers developed a prejudice against the survivors as word got around that
they were prone to as sorts of ailments, and that even those, like Nakamura-san, who were not
cruelly maimed and had not developed any serious overt symptoms were unreliable workers,
since most of them seemed to suffer, as she did, from the mysterious but real malaise that came
to be known as one kind lasting A-bomb sickness: a nagging weakness and weariness,
dizziness, a sense of doom, for it was said that unspeakable diseases might at any time plant
nasty flowers in the bodies of their victims, and even in those of their descendants.

Phrase and Clauses

18 March 2019
The Geopolitical conflicts that exist between nations will always be with us.
Geopolitical conflict will always be where nations relations are present.
It does not mean we need to fear each other.
That does not mean we need to be afraid of each other.

Manipulating Sentence Parts for Effects

20 Mar 2019
Snowden self-indulgently, putting his own preferences above everything else, short-circuited the
democratic structures of accountability.
Putting his own preferences above everything else, Snowden self-indulgently short-circuited the
accountability of the democratic structure.

Participles and Participial Phrases

27 Mar 2019
Resting on her crutches, the small girl waited with her sister in the middle of the road.
The injured girl, resting on her crutches looks into the camera.
Slang Rebels
2 April 2019
The when the writer integrated source into the paper were done well and all of the in text
citations were done correctly. The writer's work cited page well extensive and were from
different types of text and different sources. All of the sources related to the topic and were
purposeful to the text. The objective of the writing was very clear and was easy to follow and the
sentence and word they used work very well to the ton and style of writing the writer was trying
to write.
Appositives
4 April 2019
1. Identify or rename
2. Explain or give examples
3. Define
4. Summarize
Drew Gilpin Faust, a historian and president of Harvard University recently testified before the
United States Congress to encourage the government to fund more science research.
The first woman to serve as president of Harvard University and historian, Drew Gilpin Faust
recently testified before the United States Congress to encourage the government to fund more
science research.
Active or Passive voice
8 April 2019
We made an examination of the applicant’s academic record to determine whether they
established a strong affirmative case regarding their general education, and their fitness for
graduate work in their proposed subject of study. People who write letters of recommendation
have the position to analyze the candidate’s abilities and to estimate their promise are given
very serious consideration. The candidate’s results of the Graduate Record Examination are
used as a supplementary…
10 April 2019
Semicolon
TEaching young children to read is easier if the children read at home with their parents;
therefore, parental involvement in a child’s early education can greatly affect the child’s later
success in life.

They repeated the same experiment in the following four places: Austin, texas; Tallahassee,
Florida; Albuquerque, New Mexico ;and Des Moines, Iowa.