Raymond P.

Abgao 11 STEM

#2 (12/20)
If given a chance, would you live and work abroad? Why or why not? Cite 2
reasons for your choice. Support your views with examples.

Opportunities are what individuals Opportunities are what individuals

are after of. If ​I am ​given a chance to live
and work abroad, ​I’ll ​definitely take it.
The main reason for my answer is that I
want to travel to new destinations and to
earn more money. Working abroad gives
the opportunity to earn more money ​and
it is the reason ​why many Filipinos chose
to work abroad. For example, the
currency value of ​Europe​ compared to
the Philippines ​is much ​larger​. In that
case, I ​can support ​my family, send my
kids to private schools, buy my own
house or even build my own charity​ ​to
help others.
are after of. If I were given a chance to
live and work abroad, I would definitely
take it. The main reason for my answer is
that I want to travel to new destinations
and to earn more money. Working
abroad gives the opportunity to earn
more money. In fact, it is the main
reason why many Filipinos chose to work
abroad. For example, the currency value
of Euro compared to the Peso is much
higher. In that case, I can better support
my family, send my kids to private
schools, buy my own house or even build
my own charity to help others.

Relocating to another ​country gives To cite more advantages, I

the opportunity to enjoy new and
exciting destinations. I could imagine
myself under the big Eiffel tower while
taking photos of the breathtaking view of
the city with all the shimmering lights it
offers, ​or for an instance, camping under
the green​ northern lights of Iceland, with
the cold winds blowing right through my
skin ​and if I will ​be out of budget I could
just go to my neighbor. Every day will be
an adventure.
personally believe that relocating to
another country gives the opportunity to
enjoy new and exciting destinations. I
could imagine myself under the big Eiffel
tower while taking photos of the
breathtaking view of the city with all the
shimmering lights it offers. Another
worthwhile experience would be
camping under the green northern lights
of Iceland, with the cold winds blowing
right through my skin. If I would be out
of budget then I could just go to my
neighbor. Every day will be an adventure.

*Good preliminary sentence. Use the same technique in next outputs.

* “If I were… I would” is grammatically correct. Stick with it in formal writing.
*No contractions. Spell words out.
*Use proper transitionals and keep sentences short and simple.
*Directly cite the currency.
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*Stick with “higher” as to the buying capacity of money.

*Use proper transitionals in the beginning of your 2​nd​ paragraph since you aim to
mention more advantages in living overseas.
*Lengthy last few sentences. Keep them short and simple.