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DRAFT ONE
1 EXT. APARTMENT - MORNING 1
B-roll of note that says "Evil Simon, for the last time the
'war on christmas' is not a real war and setting up for it
this early isn't going to bring you 'honour,' please take our
box of string lights back to storage. ~ Good Simon"
B-roll of outside.
Good Simon wakes a bit confused and notices an iPad near him
with a sticky note on it that says "Play Me."
GOOD SIMON
Simon!
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Talking head shot with Evil Simon looking like he just took
off his Saw Doll makeup.
beat.
beat.
beat.
MICHAEL
(coming around bathroom corner)
Uhhh hey...
EVIL SIMON
(looking back over shoulder)
Ya?
MICHAEL
Oh sorry are you?
EVIL SIMON
No no it's fine, what's up?
MICHAEL
Well... bout to do laundry annnd looks
like Good Simon used up the detergent
and things annnnd didn't replace them
even though-
EVIL SIMON
You bought them last time?
MICHAEL
Yep.
EVIL SIMON
(aside to camera)
And they call me the "evil" one.
MICHAEL
You mind if I use some of your pods?
EVIL SIMON
Ya ya go ahead.
MICHAEL
Coool ummm... and how do they... I
just like throw them in with the
clothes?
EVIL SIMON
Uhh ya like one per load, two if it's
big.
MICHAEL
Huh, easy enough.
EVIL SIMON
They're the best man.
MICHAEL
Hey!
(beat)
Can't spell best without E.S!
EVIL SIMON
(points to ES on chest)
Uh.. ayooooo!
MICHAEL
Ayyyy! Aha owe ya one!
Michael exits scene and Evil Simon turns back towards camera.
EVIL SIMON
(sighs)
So anyway... I... want to play a game.
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Intro Credits...
Good Simon on his bed watching Evil Saw Doll Simon on iPad.
GOOD SIMON
Uhhh no.
EVIL SIMON
(peeking around corner)
It's rhetorical you have to.
GOOD SIMON
Simon now's not-
GOOD SIMON
(squinting and shaking head)
I do not.
(into camera)
I do not.
EVIL SIMON(O.S.)
You should try it, it's great!
GOOD SIMON
I still have a credit card!
MICHAEL (O.S.)
Wait what kind of movie?
EVIL SIMON
New installment of a series that had a
good first installment, but was
thought to be dead because they
haven't come out with a new one in
ages.
(spikes camera)
beat.
MICHAEL (O.S.)
Pass...
EVIL SIMON
Okay then byyyyyyyee... have fun!
GOOD SIMON
(cringing and collapsing head back)
(to Evil Simon)
Ughh really not in the-
(beat)
At the foot of your bed is your only
good dress shirt. To cross to your
safety you must use it as an island,
ruining your ability to wear it
tonight on your date.
(beat)
You have a choice Simon... your
vanity... or your voice. Good luck.
GOOD SIMON
Well I mean obviously my voice.
(looking down at peanut butter
bread and holding nose)
(looks towards Michael's bedroom)
Michael... little help here?
(beat)
Michael?
MICHAEL
Sorry pretty busy with laundry...
(under breath)
No thanks to you.
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MICHAEL
Hey I've told him before I'm not gonna
be one of those roommates that keeps
score, if you finish something,
replace it, that's all I ask...
MICHAEL
(to camera)
Ugh and like why he always need to cut
E.S. down like that?
MICHAEL
(to self)
...we were staying in Paris... let's
show them we are better.. let's show
them we are, show them we are...
Good Simon makes his way into the Kitchen where on the
whiteboards is a giant dry erase sign that says "Your Next
Challenge Awaits" with an arrow pointing towards the
washroom.
He turns back and opens the cupboard to see that his pop
tarts are once again missing.
Good Simon then reaches behind the poptarts and pulls out a
roll of Garbage bags.
Good Simon opens the cupboard below the sink and pulls out
gloves and a face mask.
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Good Simon drops off the garbage bag near the apartment front
door. Then turns to the washroom. On the washroom door is
written in electrical tape "Remember... X marks the spot."
GOOD SIMON
Wha... still? The one thing I asked of
him...
()
Good Simon then goes to work looking around the washroom for
the 'X'
GOOD SIMON
(sighs)
Okay... X marks the spot, x... marks
the spot.
Quick Hits:
• searching cupboard
Good Simon rolls his eyes yet again before lifting the lid
off the tank.
GOOD SIMON
(to self)
Where is he getting all these iPads?
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EVIL SIMON
Alright so you know how you always
hear about suicides in iPhone
factories... and how they have to put
up nets to stop jumpers... well
because _
i-PAD -
(holds up iPad)
-factories don't get the same
attention. They don't even bother with
the nets. So if you wait long enough,
once the last of a batch of workers
paints the parking lot, you can just
waltz right in and nab an arm
full...only downside is afterwords you
might need new shoes...
(beat)
On the plus side there were kids
making my brand literally across the
road from the factory I went to...
(beat)
Talk about serendipity huh...
Good Simon presses play on the iPad and Evil Saw Doll Simon
pops up again.
GOOD SIMON
Evil Simon you're not even paying
rent!
MICHAEL (O.S.)
You know you're talking to an iPad
right!
GOOD SIMON
I thought you had your headphones in!
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MICHAEL
(yelling to washroom)
Funny how there are certain
expectations we have of each other
hey? Things that would normally deter
gent-lmen such as ourselves from
arguments...
(beat)
(to camera)
I think he got the message.
MICHAEL
(to camera)
Ugh.. never listens.
GOOD SIMON
No that's-
As the video ends Good Simon looks to the drifter in the tub.
Quick Hits:
MICHAEL (O.S.)
Don't forget your toast!
Good Simon lugs the bag over his shoulder and starts to drag
the body as well as the toast bag to the elevator.
GOOD SIMON
Oh um... no no no no... it's uh... a
Christmas tree?
GOOD SIMON
(catching breath)
So okay this is probably gonna sound
strange, and obviously I would never
tell Evil Simon this, but... going
through these, uh, what are they...
challenges? Is kinda putting how much
I care about this new girl in
perspective. Like I was thinking...
back there by that Camry-
(points off camera)
-and I don't know if there's been a
girl I'd do this for... ya know. It's
like a new appreciation...
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EVIL SIMON
(seems sincere)
That's right, plot twist, turns out
maybe I'm not as machiavellianly evil
as I appear?
Good Simon props open the door and makes his way into the
storage locker room.
Good Simon enters the locker and opens the bin to find empty
laundry detergent bottle (or perhaps neutral simon) is in it.
GOOD SIMON
Wha...
(looks down at lock then back up)
Why?
MICHAEL
(holding a TIDE laundry detergent
pod in his hand)
If you have to ask, then that's why.
GOOD SIMON
Dude c'mon, stop playing and let me
out.
MICHAEL
Sorry man, just following the rules.
GOOD SIMON
Rules!? What the fuck are you talking
about? Michael... Michael...
GOOD SIMON
Thank you I knew-
MICHAEL
So you don't starve.
GOOD SIMON
Wait wait wait! Whatever he's paying
you I'll double it.
MICHAEL
This isn't about payment, it's about
principle... well principle and
pods... which by the way we're
switching over to.
Michael leaves out the door and the camera pans back in on
Good Simon in the cage who is bewildered, absolutely
dumbfounded... until a rustle can be heard and Good Simon
looks down at the drifter's body.
The camera pans back outside the cage and we watch as the
drifter begins to rise from the ground and tear off the
garbage bags revealing Evil Simon.
EVIL SIMON
Gotta say I'm impressed. You must
really want to tentacle this girl.
GOOD SIMON
God damn it Simon where's my money?
EVIL SIMON
Uggh you were so close to earning that
date... but even after all you've been
through, you're still missing the most
important skill: listening. Had you
acted on what you heard and not what
you Saw then ma-
GOOD SIMON
What are you talking a- would you stop
monologuing! Where's my money? And for
the love of all that is holy would let
me out please.
EVIL SIMON
But I've already told you where your
money is... don't you remember?
Evil Simon reaches into the peanut butter toast garbage bag
and pulls out a slice. Good Simon is bewildered.
EVIL SIMON
Almond butter G.S.-
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17 FLASHBACK 17
EVIL SIMON
-as harmless and feeble as the
liberals that buy it. You don't think
I'd really hurt my own flesh and
blood?
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EVIL SIMON
(beat)
Neutral Simon doesn't count... his
impact on the world was net zero.
Evil Simon slides the slice under the cage where it's picked
up by Good Simon. He looks at it questionably.
EVIL SIMON
Tell me, what's that you're holding?
GOOD SIMON
Toast... with apparently Almond
Butter?
EVIL SIMON
Don't you mean... bread with Almond
Butter?
GOOD SIMON
Well people don't generally call
toast...
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21 FLASHBACK 21
(3) Evil Simon taking money from Rainy Day Savings Box and
placing it into holes.
(4) Evil Simon lathering Almond Butter over top of holes. Pan
up to "Merry Christmas"
Good Simon snaps out of epiphany and tears through bread with
Almond Butter to find a dime.
Saw soundtrack fades into Evil Simon's phone playing the tune
in the storage locker room.
EVIL SIMON
Ohp... my alarm.
(pulls phone out and shuts it off)
There we go...
(slinging toast bag over shoulder)
Alright well... if you'll excuse me I
have a date I need to prep for... not
that I need to as I'm already equipped
with the most important feature of any
relationship-
GOOD SIMON
(defeated/annoyed)
Listening ski-
EVIL SIMON
A huge penis... oh well ya that too.
Anyway don't worry, that box of
Christmas lights in there?
GOOD SIMON
(sighs)
No... you didn't bring it down from
the apartment yet.
EVIL SIMON
Damn... had tentacle manga stache'd
inside... coulda had yourself a fun
night too.
(beat)
Well... promise I'll be back to let
you out!
(beat)
But it will be much later... maybe
like... when christmas season begins?
You let me know!
GOOD SIMON
Let me guess...
GOOD SIMON
Huh... nice surprise.
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23 CREDITS 23
SIMON VS SIMON
STARING SIMON
Good Simon with Santa Clause hat and a TIDE PODS CONTAINER in
one hand tosses his peanut butter stained dress shirt into a
washer with his other. He then extracts a pod and while