Nia Coline M.

Mendoza

JD3 – Thesis Writing 1

Dr. Hermogenes Panganiban

Legal Implications on the Commission on Human Rights’ Inaction among the Family

Members who developed Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder on Account of Extrajudicial

Killing

Summary of comments and recommendations:

 As regards the statement of the problem, verify whether or not CHR’s inaction

is tantamount to the government’s inaction;

 Upon verification, improve the Review of Related Literature with regard to

the mandate of Commission on Human Rights on account of extrajudicial

killing;

 As regards the letter to the respondents, make sure that the letter complies

with the confidentiality rule;

 Indicate the respondents in Chapter III;

 Rich literature with regard to the Post-traumatic stress disorder;

 Interview CHR Chairperson Gascon.