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Arely Alvarez
English 101
29 May 2018
The argumentative essay for me was the most challenging one. I had trouble finding the
right information to help my argument. Due to the fact that my argument really specific. Then, I
added a personal anecdote to my essay, in hopes of making me more credible. With writing this
essay, it gave me an opportunity to me able to write about a topic that I have never had the
chance to write about. It gave me an excuse to voice my opinion on a common subject that needs
to be talked about more. I also learned about the articles that I am able to access thanks to my
college’s library database. I did not have to worry about weather or not the source was credible.
It was one less thing to worry about on my plate. I was also able to conduct an interview, I had
never done a formal interview. I was a cool and very informative way to get information on my
topic. It also helped me realise the resources that I have at Los Angeles Valley College.
When revising my argumentative essay, I had a lot of syntax errors. Then with the help of
the writing center and my in class tutor, I was able to solve my errors. I had trouble making my
thesis more clear. When in fact it could be several sentences stringed together with the right
punctuation. With this new found knowledge I was able to make a better and more concise
thesis. Along with switching paragraphs in a different order making it better for the reader to