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Evaluate the lesson plan according to the following Australian Professional Standards for Teachers. Only
standards directly addressed in Designing Teaching & Learning that are relevant to this assignment have been
included. However, this does not mean the other standards are irrelevant to lesson planning and evaluation more
generally.
1.4 Strategies for teaching Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander students
1–2–3–4– Comments: There are no strategies in place for Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander students,
5 room for improvement, speeches from indigenous leaders could help improve cultural
awareness of the lesson while still providing the same learning outcome.
1.5 Differentiate teaching to meet the specific learning needs of students across the full range of abilities
1–2–3–4– Comments: No form of differentiated teaching, all students are expected to complete the
5 same activities and learn the same way.
Evaluate the lesson plan according to the following NSW Quality Teaching model elements.
Evaluation score – refer to NSW QTM Classroom Practice Guide for each element
Comments incl. evidence for evaluation score (2 sentences)
1 Intellectual quality
1.1 Deep knowledge
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – Comments: There is some discussion about certain concepts, such as the context of the
5 speeches, the effectiveness of the speeches when addressed to the audience and the
transformation/impact of text when verbally spoken, in context.
1.2 Deep understanding
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – Comments: There is prevalence of deep understanding in the lesson plan, students throughout
5 the task are encouraged to think critically about the impact of speeches on audiences and the
effects it has contextually.
1.5 Metalanguage
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – Comments: There is high use of metalanguage involved in the lesson plan due to the nature
5 of the lesson plan itself which requires students to critically analyse and interpret speeches
from a broad range of contexts, thus engaging in the analyses of language use
2.2 Engagement
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – Comments: The lesson plan has certain activities that could gauge certain levels of
5 engagement, such as the video task, group discussion, Venn Diagram activity and the speech
writing activity. However there are no strategies in place to observe and assess the
engagement level of the students
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3 Significance
3.1 Background knowledge
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – Comments: Students, at the start of the class, are asked to conduct their own research and
5 then volunteers share their information with the class in order to coincide with other students
and their back knowledge of the figures.
3.4 Inclusivity
1–2–3–4– Comments: There is frequent emphasis on student participation and volunteering in the
5 classroom, such as students answering questions, sharing their answers, sharing their
opinions on what they look for in a speech, engaging students and their personal opinions.
3.5 Connectedness
1 – 2 – 3 – 4 – Comments: Lesson is drawn from real life events in different points in history. Speeches are
5 addressed to real audiences and real social justice issues, students learn about these and can
apply these to contemporary social justice issues, especially in the current political climate
regarding race, in which MLK’s speech is specifically relevant.
3.6 Narrative
1–2–3–4– Comments: Lesson plan employs narrative from various sources through the medium of
5 speech and encourages students to engage in these narratives through activities, class
discussions and writing their own speech
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Identify the two APST standards and two NSW QT model elements you are targeting for improvement.
APST
1.4 Strategies for teaching Aboriginal and Torres Strait 2.6 Information and Communication Technology (ICT)
Islander students
QT model
1) 3.2 Cultural knowledge 2) 2.2 Engagement
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What are the social justice
issues prevalent in society
What issues was MLK’s speech
addressing
Which group was Kevin Rudd’s
apology speech directed
towards
What was the name of MLk’s
famous speech
Show the students the speech Teacher: Teacher explains the context of the speech, Student
background information of Martin Luther King,
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“I have a dream” by Martin answers any questions the students have and opens
minutes Luther King the YouTube clip of the speech
Once again, students have time Student: Students are expected to watch the video,
to write down their initial write their thoughts down and facilitate group
discussions to share their answers
thoughts in answer to the
questions regarding Martin Resurces: Martin Luther King Speech “I have a dream”
Luther King’s speech before Youtube clip
discussing these answers in https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3vDWWy4CMhE”
small groups.
Provide context for Kevin Teacher: Explain the context of the speech, answer Student
any questions the students have and open the
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Rudd’s “apology to the stolen YouTube clip of the speech
minutes generation” (3 minutes)
speech, and the opportunity to Student: Students are expected to watch the video,
ask questions before viewing write their thoughts down, facilitate group discussion
to share their answers
the video.
Resources: Kevin Rudd’s Speech “Apology to the
Students then write down their Stolen generation” 3 minute YouTube clip :
initial thoughts in answer to the https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b3TZOGpG6cM
questions regarding Rudd’s
speech.
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Provide the first example of
similarity and difference
between the two speeches to
provide students with a point
of reference for their answers.
Resources: N/A
Briefly explore the concept of
how written language when
presented to an audience
orally, can affect the power of
the written word.
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How am I measuring the outcomes of this lesson?
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Justification
While the original lesson plan provided students with a firm grasp on different texts and
emphasized the importance of speech and its effect on audiences, further improvement is possible
in correlation with the Australian Professional standards for teachers (Aitsl, 2016), particularly in
areas regarding strategies for Aboriginal and Torres strait islander students and ICT
implementation. Furthermore, in accordance to the NSW Quality Teaching framework, while the
lesson plan provided some cultural knowledge with the addition of MLK’s speech, the cultural
knowledge element could be further improved with the addition of speeches from different cultural
contexts, and the use of collaborative group work is encouraged in the lesson plan to promote the
The first alteration, which replaced the individual research activity with a group orientated task in
which students collaboratively read and comprehend the provided worksheets, addresses standards
2.5, 2.1 and 2. Changing this individually focused task to one where students read collectively in
groups results in improved reading and literacy capabilities. This change in activity is in response
2017 report by the Department of Education (2017) “Preliminary 2016 NAPLAN data shows that
about 24% of Year 9 students in NSW are at or below the national minimum standard for Reading”
(p. 8). The students were tasked to write down ideas in groups, so students who had difficulty
comprehending the worksheets could ask for assistance from their peers, engaging in a social
learning process.
The shift in focus to group based collaborative learning is influenced by research indicating that
learners have a positive pedagogical experience when sharing information and ideas. collaborative
learning is defined as the process in which “a group of learners collaborate to learn and improve
themselves” in which students share ideas, experiences and knowledge to achieve a common goal
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(Economides, 2008, p. 243). Therefore this draws away from traditional notions of teacher-centric
pedagogical practices and instead focuses on student-centric pedagogies, reinforcing elements such
as “student direction” and “engagement” from the NSW QT Framework as collaborative group
work “emphasizes the interaction among all participants in the learning experience”(Economides,
2008, 244). Furthermore, the changes in this lesson is influenced by Vygotsky’s model of social
learning, scaffolding and zone of proximal development. The lesson plan is scaffolded so that
students who are “weaker” are assisted by both the teacher through the “how to write your speech”
worksheet and examples as reference points for their answers, and through collaborative group
work can inquire assistance from peers, while still encouraging independent study so high-
While the original lesson plan incorporated ICT (Standard 2.6) with the use of YouTube videos, the
revised lesson further embeds ICT (standard 2.6) to gauge student attention and engagement,
improving pedagogical teaching practices through creative methods that are only possible through
ICT. As research indicates, ICT in classrooms have positive effects on students in areas such as
engagement, improved creativity, motivation, (Voogt et al, 2001; Passey et al, 2003) and students
are more attentive due to the “stimulating nature of the presentation”(Balanskat, Belmire & Kefala,
2006, p.30) This is achieved adding additional online components to the lesson through the form of
a Kahoot quiz and an online interactive Venn Diagram, which takes traditional aspects of old
technology such as pop quizzes, and makes it interactive and enjoyable, presenting new and
creative ways in approaching predominately traditional forms of learning. For example, the Kahoot
quiz activity was designed to provide a sense of competitiveness between the groups of students,
helps facilitate student learning and thus results in an increase in student performance (Burguillo,
2010)
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Standards 1.4. 1.3 and 1.5 are addressed in this revised lesson plan by replacing Gill’s speech from
the original lesson plan with Rudd’s speech. This change to Rudd’s speech is appropriate as its
students, while still retaining the student learning outcomes from the original lesson plan. This
intersection of content material and pedagogy with student’s prior knowledge, culture and their
local community results in higher levels of engagement with school curriculum and material
(Brayboy and Castagno, 2009). Furthermore, it is crucial that strategies for Aboriginal and Torres
strait islanders are implemented as it addresses the issue of high levels of disengagement from
content material (Closing the gap: The Prime ministers report; 2017, Shay, 2015, Mcloughlin &
Oliver, 2000), thus increasing the pedagogical learning experiences of students from indigenous
Training, 2003), The lesson plans inclusion of MLK’s speech and the addition of Rudd’s apology
speech were decided on the basis that these speeches provided invaluable cultural knowledge of
their respective societies and historical contexts of different cultures, therefore addressing the
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