Composition feedback form for essays

Student’s name: Class: ________

Compositions Mark / 10
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PREREQUISITES: DO’s: margins, blue/black ink, neat handwriting
DON’T’s: notebook paper, correction fluid
Advice to the student 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9
A. Task Fulfilment (Possible marks: 0.5 - 1 - 1.5)
1. Parts of the task have not been completed, the text does not meet the
requirements set, or does not appear to be entirely your own. (0.5)
2. You should add some more ideas/description. (0.25)
You should give more reasons/opinions. (0.25)
4. The style/register of your language is not appropriate to the task. (0.25)
5. The text is too long/short — check the word length range. (0.25)
B. Organisation (Possible marks: 0.5 - 1 - 1.5)
6. 6. Your presentation/layout/handwriting need to be improved. (0.25)
7. 7. You should check your organisation and/or paragraphing. (0.5)
8. 8. You need to add/check an/the introduction/conclusion. (0.5)
9. Your work contains repetition/ irrelevant ideas. (0.25)
A + B (30%) =
C. Grammar (Possible marks: 1- 2 - 3)
10You need to check the grammar of your work. (1)
11. You should use a greater range of grammatical structures. (1)
12. You need to check your word order. (1)
C (30%) =
D. Vocabulary (Possible marks: 1- 2 - 3)
13. You should use a greater range of vocabulary related to the topic. (1)
14. You need to check you are using the correct words. (1)
15. Your work contains Spanglish or Frenchglish. (1)
D (30%) =
E. Spelling/Punctuation (Possible marks: 0.5 - 1)
16. You should check the spellings of words in your work. (0.5)
17. You should check and improve the punctuation in your work.(0.5)
E (10%) =
TOTAL MARK