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In the three sequential lessons plans syllabus outcomes, content and requirements
concept that incorporates the way an individual thinks, constructs, and views their
world through human experience. Narrative is used to draw in the audience, through
purpose is to invite and engage the reader right from the very beginning often
narrative, the audience can gain insight into the authors personal life, behaviours,
attitudes, beliefs and lastly their imagination. Although narrative may not always be
distinctively obvious in one’s everyday life, it is very much a part of our unconscious
memories and story, which individuals often recount or relay to connect important
p.47).
The three lesson plans are carefully devised and present a combination of
appropriately selected syllabus outcomes and content points. The outcomes and
content points reflect the specific requirements for learning at a Stage 4 level. The
NSW K-10 syllabus outlines the importance for students by the conclusion of Stage 4,
texts as well as accurately, clearly and coherently compose their own texts. Through
lessons one, two and three students are encouraged to extend upon language forms
and features through analysation of Roald Dah’s extract Mrs Pratchett’s Revenge and
the poem Still I Rise by Maya Angelou to understand purpose and therefore uncover
deeper meaning. Although very different texts in relation to form, structure and
literary devices the common underlying concept portrayed in both authors text, is
how their personal life experiences are expressed through narrative through a variety
features and structures of texts whilst increasing their awareness about text
knowledge from one context to another. Both texts allow students to analyse the
sensory imagery in Dahl’s Mrs Pratchett’s Revenge and emotive language, symbolism
metaphorical language and the use of similes in Angelou’s text Still I rise. The
think profoundly enhancing cognitive thinking abilities, problem solving and reading
establish and describe the types of sensory imagery Dahl employs within his text. The
students further use their scanning, reading and interpretation skills to personally
reflect on the effect sensory imagery creates personally on themselves as the
intended audience. Lesson one ensures students are collectively exploring and
engaging personally with texts at a deeper level. Students are able to gain knowledge
about, and how to, recognise, identify and describe language structures, forms and
features within Mrs Pratchett’s Revenge to coherently understand its purpose and
understanding the use of these literary features, it allows the students to grasp a
In lesson two the students are introduced to the concept of memoirs, relative to
Dahl’s memoir Mrs Pratchett’s Revenge. Throughout the activities in lesson two, the
students engage in independent tasks which revisit aspects of their life that they
discussion the reliability of the narrator within a memoir, memoir structure, purpose
and important features. The students are extensively scaffolded and supported
entirely throughout the learning activities in preparation for constructing their own
writing text. The students are scaffolded, guided and supported through teacher
made resources, worksheets and class discussions. Students are presented with the
opportunity at the end of the lesson to compose their own writing piece
incorporating elements of sensory imagery. For homework students are able to peer
mark their classmate’s memoir against a peer feedback from. Through these learning
tasks students are able to appreciate the aesthetic qualities in their own and other
texts by utilising the power of language, exploring ideas, feeling and viewpoints in
comparing and contrasting. Initially, the lesson introduces the poem Still I Rise by
Maya Angelou. The students learn about the background of Angelou and significant
information about the cultural context of the poem. In small groups students engage
in a research tasks where they compare the cultural context of the poem to the
cultural context in today’s society through using an online concept map. This learning
activity incorporates collaborative learning and ICT. Once the students have acquired
some background knowledge they are supported through a teacher led reading of
the poem and an additional oral reading online, where the students are able to
visualise the poem being verbalised by Maya Angelou herself. Students are guided
through a class analysis of the poem with the teacher, before gaining the confidence
to break off into small groups to respond to critical discussion questions on Angelou’s
life experiences, the poems narrative and use of literary devices to create layered
meaning. In groups students are able to acknowledge the similarities and differences
allow for differentiated learning for diverse learners. Visual learning, oral learning,
creative learning and social learning just to name a few are all differentiated learning
Furthermore, think, pair, share tasks and collaborative learning in small groups allows
students to extend upon their inquiry skills and engage in join construction of texts
(Boas & Gazis, 2016). Boas & Gazis (2016), also suggest that group collaboration is
beneficial for students to share their ideas and to work with each other’s strengths in
the students being given the chance to bring their personal experiences and interests
into the learning activities. This pedagogical approach is evident within the memories
and memoirs activities where students are given the choice to construct their writing
pieces based off their own free-rein. Activating prior knowledge is further
provided with learning activities which utilise information and knowledge learnt by
the students from the previous activity. Teacher lead readings is also incorporated in
the lesson plans to provide the students with the opportunity for equal access to
comprehension, language and understanding of new texts and concepts (Boas &
Gazis, 2016).
Reference list:
New South Wales. Board of Studies. (2012). English K-10 Syllabus: NSW Syllabus for
http://www.englishtextualconcepts.nsw.edu.au/content/narrative
Sawyer, W., Gannon, S., & Howie, M. (2009). Charged with Meaning: Re-viewing
English.
Through close analysis and reading of extracts from Roald Dahl’s Boy, I hope
to improve my confidence in deconstructing texts and inviting students to
participate in this process.
I aim to facilitate class discussion on sensory imagery and other literary
features. This will be used to assess levels of student engagement and
understanding.
In this lesson my aim is for students to recognise and identify language forms,
features and structures of texts aligning with the syllabus outcome EN4-3B.
In this lesson my aim is for students to engage personally with extracts from
Roald Dah’s Boy, by engaging with the language and structure of his text in a
meaningful, contextualised and authentic way.
By the conclusion of this lesson students will gain confidence in using and
describing literary tropes.
Outcomes
Lesson 1 Outcome 3: EN4-3B: Uses and describes language forms, features and
structures of texts appropriate to a range of purposes, audiences and contexts
Content
Lesson 1:
Engage personally with texts
Engage with the language and structures of texts in meaningful,
contextualised and authentic ways.
Materials
Bring Your Own Devices (B.Y.O.D) if applicable.
Whiteboard markers.
Whiteboard.
Pens, workbooks and other stationary necessities.
Copies of the Extract Mrs Pratchett’s Revenge (one per student or one
between two).
Annotations of sensory imagery in Mrs Pratchett’s Revenge (refer to resources
below).
“Sensory detail” scaffold handout (refer to resources below).
Procedures
Introduction – Provides prior knowledge and extends on background
knowledge.
Reading and role play- Every student has the same accessibility of the short
story
Sensory detail scaffold- providing students with knowledge about sensory
imagery and its purpose.
Independent task- transfer the knowledge from the sensory detail scaffold to
the worksheet.
Pair task- transfer and connect sensory detail knowledge with the text they
have just read (close analysis).
Class Discussion- students to think deeper about the types of sensory imagery
and its purpose.
Re-pair- students to extend on their own knowledge findings and
understanding by collaborating with others.
Homework- students to take the idea of sensory imagery and apply it to one
of their own memories in relation to the narrative Mrs Pratchett’s Revenge.
Evaluation/ Extension
Evaluation:
When checking homework, the teacher will assess how many students have
incorporated sensory detail into their responses.
Teacher will be able to assess understanding through descriptive sensory
language, diction and syntax.
When checking homework, the teacher will assess how often they described
their memory with sensory detail and what type of sensory detail they used
(taste, touch, smell, sight, sound).
Teacher will be able to evaluate whether the students have achieved the
objectives set out at the beginning of the lesson through student
engagement, participation and understanding. This will include student
responses in relation to the discussion questions, story annotation examples
and evidence of higher order thinking.
Extension:
The learning in the lesson may be extended through asking students to revisit
the text and to identify other literary tropes (similes, metaphors, symbolism,
dialogue, characterisation).
To extend on the learning for everybody and promote inclusion, students
could write their own version of a transcript of the conversation between Mrs
Dahl and Mr Coombes using their imagination and creativity.
The learning could be extended on by reading another extract within Roald
Dahl’s Boy and analysing the sensory imagery used within that particular
story.
Learning can be further extended through comparing and contrasting the
language in another Roald Dahl extract to Mrs Pratchett’s Revenge.
In retrospect
Have students volunteer to participate rather than choose students.
Choose students to participate rather than asking for volunteers.
Teacher to reflect and evaluate lesson in relation to their own professional
development, taking note of what went well and also what improvements
could be made e.g. instructions were clear.
Asking students if they understand and if the instructions that are given are
clear using questioning. “Do we know what we are looking for?”,” Do we
understand what we have to do”, “Does anyone need me to repeat what we
are doing?”. This can also be done with the teacher navigating around the
classroom offering and providing assistance.
Allow for more time on the lesson activities for deeper understanding.
Teacher to assess if differentiation was adequate and take into consideration
if improvements are needed for next lesson.
Resources
Outcomes
Lesson 2 Outcome 1 EN4-1A: Responds to and composes texts for understanding,
interpretation, critical analysis, imaginative expression and pleasure.
Content
Lesson 2:
Engage personally with text
Explore and appreciate the aesthetic qualities in their own and other texts
and the power of language to communicate information, ideas, feeling and
viewpoints.
Respond to and compose
Respond to and compose imaginative, informative and persuasive texts for
different audiences, purposes and context for understanding, interpretation,
critical analysis, imaginative expression and pleasure.
Procedures
Introduction- revisit last lesson and introduce the text type of memoirs for
the students to make connections between the lessons and purpose of the
homework task.
Class Discussion- for students to self-assess if they think that a memoir has a
reliable narrator.
Pizza Analogy- for students to gain insight into a real life example that is
relatable to the age group in order for them to grasp the concept and
meaning of a memoir. Visual analysis to assist different types of learners.
My memories worksheet- is a scaffold used to prepare the students for the
following task of writing their own memoirs.
Memoirs worksheet on opposite side- provides students with ideas on what
to incorporate in their memoirs (next task) and the structure, with some
starting points as support to enhance creative flow.
Memoir example- teacher to provide memoir example to allow students to
see a different type of memoir first hand other than Mrs Pratchett’s Revenge.
Allows students to mimic structure and pay attention to sensory imagery.
Memoir writing- allows students to use imagination and creativity to
compose their own texts with purpose and intent using literary devices in
particular sensory imagery. The activity ties in all the previous activities into
one. The previous provided worksheets and scaffolds will support and assist
this process.
Homework task- to assess and evaluate their peers work for the purpose of a
better understanding about their own memoir writing piece.
Time Organisation Teaching/ learning activities
Lesson 2
(15 mins) Students to enter the Introduction and Recap
classroom and re-visit their Teacher to ask students share their writing pieces
homework task from the from their homework task to introduce the text
previous lesson. type of Memoirs.
Teacher to ask some Class Discussion
students who are confident Do you think your memory is an accurate
and wish to share their interpretation of the event?
writing pieces. Do you think that if the memory was a long time
Teacher to guide students ago that we can remember all happenings
listening to the sensory correctly?
description in the responses. Do you think if someone was there at the time of
the memory (hypothetically or not) would they
Teacher to write the see and describe the memory the same way as
Discussion questions on the you did?
board. Teacher to discuss bias, point of view and the
Students to work in pairs to duration of time- how long ago the memory
think about and answer the occurred.
discussion questions on the Teacher to ask students to think about these
board. questions in relation to Roald Dahl’s extract of
Students to share their Mrs Pratchett’s Revenge.
responses with class. In Pairs students to share responses with each
other.
Student lead class discussion to take place.
Teacher to write definition of
memoir onto the board for Introducing Memoirs
students to copy out. Provide students with a definition of a memoir
Teacher to verbally explain which they are encouraged to copy down from
the Pizza analogy for the board into their books.
students to gain relatable Teacher to use an analogy to explain to the
insight about what a memoir students further about a memoir and the
is. difference between a memoir and an
autobiography.
Pizza analogy with visuals
Teacher to use the Pizza analogy “An
autobiography is like having a hole pizza to
yourself whereas a Memoir is just taking one slice
of the pizza and eating it, focusing and enjoying
only that one slice and what it has to offer out of
the many slices. What we are doing is choosing
one slice of Roald Dah’s Pizza and picking all the
toppings off that one slice” (refer to resources
below).
Teacher to compare this analogy to the Novel Boy
and the Chapter Mrs Pratchett’s revenge stating
that the novel Boy is the whole Pizza where Mrs
Pratchett’s Revenge is just one slice out of many
other slices.
(15 mins) Teacher to explain task Independent student task- “My Memories worksheet”
instructions in relation to the Students to fill out “My memories worksheet”
“My Memories” worksheet. (refer to resources below).
Students to fill out the
handout. Teacher to allow students the opportunity to
Teacher to circulate class, share one of their memories from their worksheet
offering assistance and with the class.
prompting questioning
through one on one
discussion.
(15 Mins) Teacher to inform students Features and Example of a Memoir
that they will be having an Refer students to prompts on “Memoirs” handout
attempt at writing their very on the opposite side of the “My Memories”
own memoir. worksheet (refer to resources below).
Teacher to read to the Students to write a memoir extending upon one
students the other side of of the memories identified in their previous table.
the “My Memories” Before students begin teacher to discuss the
Handout which has following features of a memoir (Refer students to
information about how to handout to assist discussion about first person
write a Memoir. etc).
Teacher to reinstate Teacher to give students and display on the
important information about whiteboard an example of a short memoir or their
how to write a memoir and very own personal memoir they devised prior to
its features. lesson.
Teacher to hand out and
display on the whiteboard an
example of a memoir either
their own or another
example.
(15 mins) Students to write their own Independent writing task
Memoir in their workbooks. Allow students 15 minutes to write their memoirs.
Teacher to circulate
classroom, offering
assistance and prompting
discussion with students.
Homework Peer editing task
Students to swap books with another student and
complete a peer feedback form. The feedback
from makes suggestions to the inclusion,
emotional response and effect on the reader in
relation to incorporating sensory detail.
Teacher to hand out peer feedback form (see
resources).
Evaluation/ Extension
Evaluation
By gaging student confidence levels through class discussion, worksheet
analysis, think, pair and share responses and memoir writing the teacher can
evaluate how well students have understood the form and features of writing
a memoir.
Through the student’s construction of their very own memoir the teacher can
understand the student’s knowledge about language forms that have been
incorporated in their own composed text.
Through students devising a memoir the teacher can informally assess how
well students met the content in the syllabus in relation to responding and
composing texts for understanding, interpretation, critical analysis,
imaginative expression and pleasure.
Through class discussion and responses teacher can evaluate students’
interpretations of texts and their personal responses to the texts and further
through their peers’ texts.
Through the peer editing task as homework the teacher can observe how well
the students have understood the concepts and how sensory description
provides reading pleasure for the intended reader.
Extension
Revising and annotating their own memoirs and identifying sensory imagery.
Editing and marking their own memoirs against the peer editing and feedback
sheet.
Student’s to revise their use of dialogue tags and adjust if required e.g. She
said vs. She screamed.
Students to annotate the teacher’s example of a memoir paying close
attention to sensory description, making suggestions and contributions.
Students to mark and edit the teacher’s memoir against the peer feedback
sheet.
Students to analyse a memoir without sensory description and compare the
differences.
Students to remove the sensory description from the memoir and answer
some extended discussion questions about this change and the impact it
makes on the audience.
Students to add another language trope within their memoir such as a
metaphor, simile, symbolism etc. to challenge thinking.
To extend on the learning for everybody and promote inclusion students to
draw illustrations to accommodate their memoirs.
In retrospect
Have students volunteer to participate rather than choose students.
Choose students to participate rather than asking for volunteers.
Teacher to reflect and evaluate lesson in relation to their own professional
development, taking note of what went well and also what improvements
could be made e.g. instructions were clear.
Asking students if they understand and if the instructions that are given are
clear using questioning. “Do we know what we are looking for?”,” Do we
understand what we have to do”, “Does anyone need me to repeat what we
are doing?”. This can also be done with the teacher navigating around the
classroom offering and providing assistance.
Allow for more time on the lesson activities for deeper understanding.
Teacher to assess if differentiation was adequate and take into consideration
if improvements are needed for next lesson.
Incorporate a research task which requires students to look up their own
definition of a memoir to incorporate an ICT element.
Students to watch a short video about what is a memoir and its purpose to
gain understanding through a visual medium (I personally could not find an
appropriate and engaging video to be able to do this).
Set out the information about constructing a memoir on a slide show on the
whiteboard instead of on a paper worksheet.
Resources
To help students draw connections between forms, features and ideas within
different texts.
Through analysis and deconstruction of Maya Angelou’s poem Still I Rise,
students to strengthen their understanding of the various way’s different
narratives, aspects of life, or experience can be conveyed through texts.
For students to have a deeper understanding of the similarities and
differences between Angelou’s text and Dahl’s text.
For students to compare and contrast Dahl’s and Angelou’s life experiences
and understand these distinctions.
For students to develop skills in comparative analysis.
For students to recognise, identify and describe language forms and features
within texts.
For students to understand that texts can be conveyed differently for a range
of purposes and appeal to different audiences.
For students to understand that different forms of text incorporate different
language features.
Outcomes
Lesson 3 Outcome 6 EN4-6C: Identifies and explains connections between and
among texts
Content
Lesson 3:
Procedures
Evaluation/ Extension
Evaluation:
Through student responses, pair, group and class discussions and analysis the
teacher will be able asses and reflect on how well the students can articulate
the different ways that life experience can be represented through text.
Through the group comparative analysis table, the teacher will be able to
understand how well the students can understand the different forms of
narrative and its purpose on the intended reader through analysing literary
devices, form and structure (how they are similar and how they differ).
Through comparative table and group tasks the teacher will be able to
informally asses the students understanding in relation to the links between
the ideas, information, perspectives and points of view presented the two
texts.
Through homework task teacher will be able to gain insight into how much
transferable knowledge the students have gained between the three
sequential lessons and create new meaning through constructing something
new.
Extension:
In retrospect
Teacher to reflect and evaluate lesson in relation to their own professional
development, taking note of what went well and also what improvements
could be made e.g. instructions were clear.
Asking students if they understand and if the instructions that are given are
clear using questioning. “Do we know what we are looking for?”,” Do we
understand what we have to do”, “Does anyone need me to repeat what we
are doing?”. This can also be done with the teacher navigating around the
classroom offering and providing assistance.
Allow for more time on the lesson activities for deeper understanding.
Teacher to assess if differentiation was adequate and take into consideration
if improvements are needed for next lesson.
Students to analyse another text from a different mode such as a short film,
advertisement, picture book etc.
Students to conduct an innocent analysis of the poem Still I rise instead of a
class collective analysis.
Students to represent information in their own slideshow instead of
comparative table one slide show representing similarities and the second
slide the differences and group to give short presentation.
Resources