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Reviewer: Elvia Hernandez

Reviewee: Minerva Mejia


ETEC 424.01W
EPS Peer Review
Educational Philosophical Statement Rubric (EPS Rubric)
Criterion Undocumented 0 Minimal 1 Basic 2 Proficient 3 Advanced 4 Comments
Unacceptable Unacceptable Acceptable Acceptable Acceptable
Idea Development The statement does not The statement Statement Using Using sound 4
address the author’s views expresses the logically generally assumptions Your philosophy clearly states
about the purposes of author’s views develops the sound and the principles of education. Your
education, guiding about the author’s views assumptions arguments,
experiences as a parent and as
educational principles, purposes of about the and the statement
understanding of learning, education, purposes of arguments, logically an instructor has helped you
and/or the most guiding education, based on develops the gain the knowledge on effective
appropriate strategies for educational guiding practical author’s strategies that will work in the
teaching. The statement is principles, educational experience, views about field of education. You have
incoherent or extremely understanding principles, the statement the purposes also gained knowledge to
brief or contains major of learning, understanding logically of education, identify student’s needs.
logical inconsistencies. and/or the most of learning, develops the guiding
appropriate and/or the author’s educational
strategies for most views about principles,
teaching, but is appropriate the purposes understanding
ambiguous or strategies for of education, of learning,
not connected. teaching. guiding and/or the
However, the educational most
statement is principles, appropriate
not always understanding strategies for
consistent of learning, teaching. The
and/or and/or the statement
convincing. most includes
appropriate sound ethical
strategies for or
teaching. psychological
arguments
and not just
practical
ones.
Illustrative No illustrative Supporting Examples in Supporting Specific 4
Examples examples are included. examples are support of examples examples The examples that you have
inadequate or of points are from the from the provided give a good picture of
unclear relevant but writer’s writer’s
why you want to become a
relevance. general or not experience personal
based are specific experience, teacher. Sounds like role models
inexperience. and pertinent. academic have been an inspiration to you
work, or field to become an educator. Also,
experience your experiences have been a
illustrate big eye opener to you on what
points in a students need to be successful in
vivid or
the classroom. I know you will
memorable
way.
be a very caring teacher!
Quality of Writing The statement is very The statement, The statement The In addition to
difficult to read because though is statement is being clear, 2
of its style, usage, comprehensible, understandable clear, well well Your philosophy in education
mechanics, or has obvious plus two of the organized, organized,
was very enjoyable to read but, I
organization. problems in two following: free from free from
of the following 1) organized, errors of errors of noticed some orthographic
areas: style, 2) free from mechanics mechanics mistakes. Please make sure to
usage, and errors of and usage, and usage, use the correct punctuation
mechanics, or mechanics and written in and written in when writing sentences. By
organization. and usage, an an doing this you could avoid run-
3) in an appropriate appropriate on sentences. There are some
appropriate academic academic
websites that could be beneficial
academic style. style, the
style. statement:
to help write papers without
1) has a errors.
single,
unifying
theme and
2) is strongly
suggestive
of the
writer’s
voice.

Additional Comments Total: 10

Reviewee: Minerva Mejia Date: 07-26-2019

Evaluator: Elvia Hernandez Date: 07-26-2019

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