Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
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Child Soldiers
By Tiana Ford
Sources
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Annotations
Source 1- Bales, Kevin, et al. Modern Slavery: the Secret World of 27
Million People. Oneworld, 2009.
Porters: The porters were forced to carry
“They work as porters, heavy loads of ammunition, food and
messengers, cooks, supplies for the army without adequate
food, shelter and access to medical care, as
informants, spies, and as
well as clean up after the group.
combatants; the Combatants: All members of the armed
availability of light, small forces conflict are combatants, except
medical and religious personnel.
firearms has made it easier
for small children, some as Light, small firearms: Indication that
firearms are given to all members of the
young as seven or eight, to force.
engage in combat…. Many Easier for small children….Young as
seven or eight: It doesn’t matter what
join to escape domestic age you are as long as you can hold a
violence, abuse or poverty gun you can fight.
Escape domestic violence, abuse or
and some responded to poverty: It is a way for the children to
political propaganda. run away from their homes and live a
‘better’ life or become a part of a life that
Rarely is there genuine they thought was better than their
voluntary recruitment…. current situation.
Attempts: There obviously haven’t been
Attempt to leave is many who have successfully
punished with beatings, Beatings, threats of retaliation…child’s
family, threats of death: Children that
threats of retaliation
tried to escape from the army normally
against the child’s family, ended up in situations where they have
or threats of death…. Africa been both verbally and physically
abused.
has the highest rates of Highest rates: There are high rates of
children entering armed children being forced into the army that
is filled of children aged 7-18 years of age.
groups through force or Through force…abduction: The children
abduction, followed by are either forced into the army or they
are abducted from their family home
Asia, the Americas, then and placed into the army by the
Europe.” government.
Introduction:
Thesis
Purpose of the essay
o To make a judgement about how the tenets of the transatlantic
slave trade (TAST) is present in other forms of contemporary
slavery such as Child Soldiers.
Introduce the body arguments of the essay
o Each paragraph will be about one tenet. The 1st paragraph is about
the organisation, 2nd dehumanisation, 3rd commodification and 4th
anti-slavery campaigns.
Body 1: Organisation
Quick overview to state what the paragraph is about.
o The organisation of slavery is the act of individuals or groups
coming together in order to coordinate the action of forcing
people to be involved in a range of exploitative practices, such
as TAST and Child Soldiers.
Source 1 and 5 (Evidence)
o The evidence will include source 1 (abstract from…. About how the
soldiers are obtained) and source 5 (a letter from one of the African
chiefs about how they organised slavery)
Explain the evidence and how they are connected
o The paragraph is about how both the transatlantic slave trade and
child soldiers have to organise their form of slavery in a similar
way. The transatlantic through trading and the child soldiers
through political propaganda and ‘a better life.’
Link to thesis
o The two different forms of slavery both include a specific way of
organisation causing contemporary forms of slavery, such as Child
soldiers, to have that of the same tenet as the transatlantic slave
trade.
Body 2: Dehumanisation
Quick Overview
o The dehumanisation of a person is the deed of renouncing one’s
human qualities. This tenet occurs predominantly in TAST, but
it also plays a major part of the Child Soldiers.
Source 2 and 6
o Source 2 (abstract from ….) which Is about how girls are
dehumanised. Source 6 (letter to master) the language that they use
in their letter and how they dehumanise themselves.
Explain
o This paragraph explains how both forms of slavery are
dehumanising to all slaves that are involved. TAST through their
use of language and how they were to be inherited like an object.
The child soldiers through how the girls are used for sexual services
as well as be forced to fight.
Link
o Even though both forms of slavery have a different way of the
slaves being dehumanised, it essentially causes the tenet
(dehumanisation) of the TAST to be seen within the Child Soldiers
army.
Body 3: Commodification
Quick Overview
o Commodification is the process of one becoming a materialistic
value in another man’s eyes. This was a major part of TAST and
continues on today in the Child Soldiers.
Source 3 and 7
o Source 3 (The abstract from world vison that shows how the
children have become a commodity) and source 7 (a flyer that
shows what slaves were being sold and has writing on it that was
put there by a buyer)
Explain
o This paragraph shows how commodification is used in both TAST
and child soldiers. TAST through how they sold/auctioned off the
African slaves and the child soldiers through how cheap and
replaceable they were within the army.
Link
o In both forms of slavery, the slaves are being bought and sold for
cheap prices and because they are replaceable, causing
Commodification to play a major part as a tenet in TAST as well as
with the Child Soldiers.
Conclusion:
Reinforce purpose of essay
o It was through the tenets of TAST that other forms of slavery, such
as Child Soldiers, had begun to arise in the modern world.
Reference thesis
o This led to the legal and illegal act of a person adding to their
addition of one’s wealth and property.
Outline how body answers question
o Allowing for the different tenets of TAST to be present in the form
of Child soldiers.
Essay
Slavery is the legal or illegal act of a person added as another addition of
one’s wealth and property. The tenets of the Transatlantic Slave Trade
(TAST), such as dehumanisation, are present within most contemporary
forms of slavery, one being Child Soldiers. The main four tenets
(organisation, dehumanisation, commodification and anti-slavery
campaigns) of the Transatlantic Slave Trade are present within the
contemporary form and allows for a connection between the two types of
slavery to appear.
It was through the tenets of the Transatlantic slave trade that other forms
of slavery, such as Child Soldiers, had begun to arise in the modern world.
These contemporary forms of slavery were based upon the Transatlantic
slave trade and older acts of slavery. This led to the legal and illegal act of a
person adding to their addition of one’s wealth and property, which allowed
for a person to gain more power in a social setting. This caused for the
different tenets of the Transatlantic slave trade to be present in the form of
Child soldiers.
Reflection
Throughout the assignment, I’ve come to realise that there are many tenets
that occur in slavery and that each main tenet, such as the organisation, the
dehumanisation of people, the commodification and the many anti-slavery
campaigns that have been created by all walks of people. As I was
completing the assignment I came to realise that my chosen contemporary
form, child soldiers, was so much worse than I originally thought it would be.
Learning about what happened to those children was heartbreaking and
emotional. When I was writing my essay plan I came to realise that writing
about my contemporary form first helped me to then write about the
transatlantic slave trade. How I structured by essay really worked for me
and having the essay plan made it a lot easier to write my final essay. The
thing that didn’t work to well for me was the vast amount of the child
soldier’s sources to choose from. I say this because there were so many
sources that would’ve worked well, but they didn’t all say the same thing.
Some only talked about the males that were enlisted into the army and not
the females. I think next time I’m going to elaborate a little more on how the
two forms of slavery contrast one another instead of how they intertwine
and how they’re different. I say this because I believe it would give a
stronger argument about the case.
Bibliography
Bales, Kevin, et al. Modern Slavery: The Secret World of 27 Million
child-soldiers-1049.
2015, childsoldierinternational.wordpress.com/2015/05/15/stop-
children-soldiers/.