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Name: Dexter C.Josue Section: Dig 202

ILS Activity and Monitoring Sheet

I. Writing Process Checklist

Accomplished? Date Accomplished/

Writing Process Yes No Signature

1. Pre-writing activity:
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2. Drafting

A. Thesis Statement

B. Topic Sentence

C. First Draft

3. Revising

4. Editing

5. Publishing

II. Drafting

A. Thesis Statement

Everybody situation was even made worse because of lack electricity ,lack of regular

source food and clean water .

B. Topic Sentence

1. Due to power outages they are unable to do the school work properly.

2. They find it hard to get what they need and they struggle to use what they need

because of the lack of resources.

3. They have a hard time getting water because they are just down the river to get water

and it is not clean yet but for them to just drink they are okay.

III. First Draft

English for Academic and Professional Purposes Mr. Marven L. Odoño

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Most of the people need electricity in their everyday lives in order to do different task or

duty. Even the technologies that we use needs power supply for us to use it also affects the

production of food supply. Different kind of food are now processed and produce through

machinery . One more thing faces by many of us is having experience of dirty and polluted

air because of garbage and waste product .This three things really contributed to unhealthy

lifestyle.

Every situation was even made worse because of it lacks of electricity, lack of regular

source of food and clean water.

Due to power outages they are unable to do their school works properly. They managed

to work using glimpse of candles at night just to make their assignments, projects and more.

But how about those helpless people that why depend on lights. They might fail or get low

grades for not doing their given task because there is no power supply in their community.

They find it hard to get what they need and they struggle to use what they need because of the

lack resources. This only implies that, If only they have the enough necessity they could live

more productive and easy. They have a hard time getting water because they are just down

the river to get water and it is now clean yet but for them to just drink they are okay.

Water is very important in our daily living. Starting to use for drinking water, washing

clothes, washing dishes, watering the plants, taking a bath and many more. But not totally

safe to use the water coming from the rives. Because sometimes it is polluted. But some us

prepared to use it because there is no more choice source of water in the area.

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After watching this episode of I witness. This scenario provide realizations of having enough

basic needs like going to school at ease with no hazard facing our way and most important,

far from danger and our lives are easier compare to those who live in an isolated island.

IV. Reference/s

English for Academic and Professional Purposes Mr. Marven L. Odoño