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Cell phones are helpful tools that are rapidly becoming more
and more integrated into everyday life— including life at school. Madison Rafter 2018-11-21 10:41 PM
Comment [1]: This was the “hook.” I used
a fact to grab the readers’ attention.
There are several compelling reasons why cell phones should be
included in classroom activities. For one, cellular devices support Madison Rafter 2018-11-21 10:42 PM
Comment [2]: Topic Sentence! Introduces
the topic so readers know exactly what
educational games that can be played in class. Cell phones also they’re getting into.
Madison Rafter 2018-11-21 10:42 PM
Comment [3]: BODY PARAGRAPH 1 IN
allow access to several apps that could be helpful in the RED
classroom, and can even help make new media projects more Madison Rafter 2018-11-21 10:44 PM
Comment [4]: BODY PARAGRAPH 2 IN
BLUE
accessible in class. Under the right circumstances, incorporating Madison Rafter 2018-11-21 10:44 PM
Comment [5]: BODY PARAGRAPH 3 IN
GREEN
the use of cell phones into classroom activities can be a benefit
to student learning, by allowing student access to educational Madison Rafter 2018-11-21 11:27 PM
Comment [6]: Thesis statement. My main
perspective. Claim + Reasoning.
games, apps, and new media assignments.
First, cell phones support many educational games that can Madison Rafter 2018-11-22 8:42 AM
Comment [7]: Transition word: lets the
audience know we’re shifting gears!
bring new energy into the classroom. For example, Kahoot is an
more involved in their studies, and have some fun along the way.
Another game that could be played in class is Poll Me. This app
the usual pencil and paper. A third app that can add to the
practice for tests in an interactive way that will mix things up and
games to offer that will help benefit the classroom. Madison Rafter 2018-11-21 10:40 PM
Comment [8]: Clincher / Concluding
sentence
Next, with cell phones in the classroom, students will have
access to helpful apps from their own devices that would help
students who have phones, and do not have to wait for a turn
students will be able to easily record and edit their videos without
and diverse projects that are now possible for students to create
access to a tool as useful as the cell phone. Electronic devices Madison Rafter 2018-11-22 8:47 AM
Comment [10]: Sentence transitioning
into the concluding paragraph
have plenty to offer in the classroom, like educational games,
learning. The helpful apps that cell phones provide are valuable
the possibility for including new media projects into high school
changing up their classroom should consider it! Madison Rafter 2018-11-22 8:54 AM
Comment [11]: Concluding sentence
gesturing towards the future!