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Arief Adi Nugroho

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arief.adi@ui.ac.id
Central of Jakarta
DKI Jakarta
Indonesia

(Use Cover Letter


July,2019 (Date)
Template. It’d be
Dear Sir or Madam, Commented [AF1]: It is better if you put the company’s
much better) name. For example: Dear X Recruitment Team,

I should be grateful if you would consider my application for the position required.(Give space for Commented [AF2]: would
another paragraph)
Please be attention (Do not use this. The recruitment would lose interest to read this essay
since you force like asking them to keep reading your essay), that I still waiting for my
graduation from university until the end of August. However, I want to be a productive person to kill Commented [AF3]: It would be better if you say
the leisure time. (If you put this, you only interest to join this company only to fill your leisure Currently, I am a final year student/fresh graduate
time. Put stronger reason) So, I am looking forward to search for a new career opportunity in student at X University and hopefully will be graduated
on August this year.
Greater Jakarta, where my academic background and personnel skills will allow me the opportunity
of growth. Commented [AF4]: personal

I enjoyed four years of college study in engineering and proud to be a Cumlaude student. In college,
I studied a lot of many primary basic theories and did many experiments to imagine condition of
practical in real life more deeper. Hopefully, I can solve many problems with my own knowledge. Commented [AF5]: deeper

During college time, I have been internship for two times. First, I already interned on Perusahaan Commented [AF6]: I have done internship
Listrik Negaa (PLN) in Cinere, Depok. It was my debut internship to aplicating my knowledge. Not Commented [AF7]: I did my internship at ..
only my knowledge but also I learned to communicate each other as a worker. Next, I was interned
on PT. Pasific Chevron Indonesia in Riau, Sumatra. In there, I was surprised that the field was very Commented [AF8]: implement
wide (Not Important) and many generators around them. I learned a lot of protection of power Commented [AF9]: I also
system that can made my awareness of safety will be increased. Commented [AF10]: Communicate with each other
Commented [AF11]: My second internship was at PT.
I am also bilingual with fluent verbal and written skills in Indonesia and English. Actually, I studied
Pacific Chevron Indonesia
both of languages since I was kid. (Not important, if you want to show your language skills,
prove it in your writing skills) Commented [AF12]: Pacific
Commented [AF13]: During my internship at PT.
Considering my academic performance so far, I am conviced that I will be a valuable addition to your Chevron,
company (You judge from your own perspective) . I hope to take this opportunity, so I can prove Commented [AF14]: I hope by taking this opportunity will
the quality of my softskills and hardskills. prove my ..
Commented [AF15]: Soft skills and hard skills.

Thank you for consideration.

Yours sincerely,
Arief Adi Nugroho
Suggestion
1. Put your identity for introduction (what are you studying, what
semester are you in, where is your university)
2. Put exact Date
3. You need to rethink to put some ‘judging words’. (please be
attention, I am convinced that I will be a valuable)
4. Need some grammar correction
5. Put stronger reason to show your interest to the company

Hope this will help you, Arief. All the best for you!

Sincerely,
Alvin Fanthony

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