Wildfire is a condition where the regions were burning and very difficult to extinguish it.

Wildfire in

Indonesia had been from 1998 until now. The worst wildfires were 1998,2015, and 2019 in the region Commented [1]: Had been what?
Do you mean had been occurred? Sudah jerjadi sejak . . .?
of Sumatra, Kalimantan, Nusa tenggara and papua. It gave us a lot of negative impact in Indonesia. Commented [2]: Were in

Wildfire had been around in Indonesia forest for the last 21 years. It occurred cause by human Commented [3]: You can use: Human activity and natural
activity are two factors that cause wildfire.
activity and natural activity. BNPB(Badan Nasional Penanggulangan Bencana) informs that

“approximately 98 percent of wildfires in Riau were caused by people”. As far as I am concerned,

wildfire gave a positive impact for certain people who aim to open the plantation land and negative

impacts on society and environment. The burning forest is a habitat of animals and now animals lost Commented [4]: Terbalik, it's supposed to be The forest
burning ...
And oleaseplease check your sentence.
their home because of wildfire. Consequently, the animals went to the settlement to save themselves
Do you mean to give explanation about the forest burning
or the effect of forest burning? You have to make your idea
and looking for a food like bears and orangutans. Some people ever seen two tigers came out of the clear. State your idea one by one.
Commented [5]: Do you mean the animals eat bears and
forest fires. Many snake are died like phythons, king kobra and etc. orang utan or the animal who went to the settlent are bear
and orang utan? Please check your sentence carefully.
Wildfire also can produce the smog and it spread to the regions of Indonesia. The smog of Commented [6]: Kalau jamak, please add s at the end of
the word.
wildfire is very dangerous for our healthy and it makes our country uncomfortable. The smog can Commented [7]: spreads
Commented [8]: Why you use our here?
cause cough, Thoat irritation, ISPA(URI), TBC, Pneumonia and Lung cancer. The chronic disease will Kalau dari awal Ifa gak ada bahas tentang aku dan kamu,
sebaiknya jangan pakai our. Kalimatnya terlalu Indonesian
appear a few years later. However, the children and the babies in the womb get disease faster than translation banget.
Commented [9]: You can use : people's health atau
adults. According to the research, nearly 10 million children in Indonesia are dangerous because of the dibikin lebih tegas lagi, people's , animal and all living
creature's health.
toxic air. Many newborn babies are died and many children are affected by URI. The children are Commented [10]: Omit the word our and changes it with
the country atau the world.
vulnerable because their immunity is not perfect yet. Commented [11]: Typo, check it on your dictionary.
Commented [12]: Typo again
These cases gave traumatic to the people, especially parents who are the victims. Therefore, the
Commented [13]: Typooo, oh come on..
government is expected to be more resolute to resolved the wildfire. The government is also expected Commented [14]: Omit this, just. Use affected
Commented [15]: Find the synonym of expected. Terlalu
to give sanction to the people who carried the wildfire. We can do the several method to reduce the sering pakai kata expected buat orang jadi malas bacanya.
Commented [16]: Change this with everyone
negative impacts of smog by wearing a mask everytime leave home, close the ventilation by using the
Commented [17]: Every time they leave home

wet cloth, turn on the fan or air conditioner and don’t do many activities in the outside.