YOUNG PEOPLE AND SOCIAL NETWORK

I am a Young woman worried about the problems that Young people present in
social network. Many times my Friends tell me that i am overprotective since i dont
like young spending a lot of time on a cell pone without knowing what they do or the
changes that they have when they use social network.
The problem is that young people at their age is difficult because they have hormonal
changes and being ´´perfect´´ is what they want and social network are part of this
problem.

Young people today use many social networks and even spend a lot of their time on
their cell phone and be connected to the most used social networks such as Facebook,
Instagram, those apps which are very harmful for young people since at their age
may having anxiety disorder and depression so it is difficult for them not to compare
their life and their social connections with what they see others publish on social
networks. Whatever the cause, this increased anxiety is a real problem for our youth.
Chronic anxiety can cause serious mental health problems, depression, substance
use and even suicide.

The pictures sometimes are few realistic that offers in the social network and can do
younger have feel of self awareness , low self-esteem and the search of perfectionis
can manifest by anxiety disorder. The problem occurs at the moment when the
person who continuously receives that information loaded with the optimism of
others, does not go through his best moment, and is tormented when compared with
his cheerful contacts, without stopping to think that the lives of these people are
surely not so fantastic, because a good part is nothing more than accessory
projections of depressive states that need to satisfy your ego. However, what counts
is the message that is transmitted to the frame, what we get to perceive, so we extend
a positive publication to the life of a person.

This problem in the college can interfere with the ability to focus and learn what it
may mean to have problems academic, which can have a long-term impact. It can
also cause physical problems, such as headaches, chronic pain, digestive problems
and heart disease later. I like to talk about this topic since I met a friend who had an
emotional impact on social networks and because of the harassment she had from
school which led her to depression and even attempted suicideTalk about this its
importante since the social network as with other tools they are beneficial and
harmful for personal evolution it depend on the way we use it. However, in this world
in which we live there are good and bad people who sometimes young people want
have popularity, social networks are not a popularity contest, or at least they should
not be understood as such, it is not necessary to follow or add users with who we
know that we will not interact since at the time of sharing publications they do not
see that such people can cause mental damage by malicious comments about what
they publish.
That is why it is important for parents to control so that young people learn to use
networks well and upload content more carefully. Internet is a great tool to enrich
our life and knowledge, but as with any source of information, the emotional impact
of perceived stimuli depends solely on our interpretation, on the way we let it affect
us. For this reason I use social network carefully and when I upload content from
my deal that bad comments do not affect me and i avoid such people. Social network
is a very good tool only that bad people damage how beautiful it is.

Outline for a Five-Paragraph Essay

Title: YOUNG PEOPLE AND SOCIAL NETWORK

I. Introduction
A. Introductory statement
B. Thesis statement: Most young people believe
in the perfection that exists in social networks.

II. Body

A. First Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence): The

danger of using social networks
1. Upload content and receive bad
comments
2. Cyberbulling
3. Pishing
B. Second Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence):
Problems that can trigger young people

1. At their age may having anxiety

disorder and depression.
2. have low self-esteem for the perfection
seen in networks
3. suicidal behaviors or thoughts
1. Third Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence): the
struggle for popularity is a problem in young
people.

1. His eagerness to excel, young people

devote excess time to this purpose
2. it can generate stress and even
disappointment
3. Can be frustated
II. Conclusion

A. Closing statement
B. Restate thesis: Social network is a very good
tool only that bad people damage how beautiful
it is. must be used carefully