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Vahideh Akbari
Science and Research Branch, Islamic Azad University
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Mahboubeh Ghofrani
Tehran Central Branch, Islamic Azad University
Iran
ABSTRACT
In order to illuminate the effectiveness of alternative assessment in second language (L2)
writing, the purpose of this study was set to investigate the impact of portfolio-based instruction on L2
writing performance of Iranian English as a Foreign Language (EFL) learners. In so doing, a sample of
46 Iranian EFL learners who were the students of two intact classes in an Iranian language center
participated in the present study. The two classes were randomly assigned to an experimental group (N
= 22) and a control group (N = 24). The experimental group was taught through portfolio-based writing
instruction while the control group received the traditional writing instruction. The data were collected
through two timed-writing tasks given as the pre-test (before the treatment) and post-test (after the
treatment) of the study. The results indicated that the students of the experimental group outperformed
those of control group in L2 writing performance, suggesting that portfolio-based writing instruction
significantly contributed to enhancing the writing performance of the participants. The findings of the
study offer some practical implications for L2 writing teachers and learners.
Keywords: Portfolio Assessment, Alternative Assessment, Writing Performance, Second Language
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Akbari, V. & Ghofrani, M. (2019). Enhancing Writing Performance of Iranian EFL Learners through Portfolio-
Based Instruction. International Journal of English Language & Translation Studies. 7(3). 142-150.
Cite this article as: Akbari, V. & Ghofrani, M. (2019). Enhancing Writing Performance of Iranian EFL Learners
through Portfolio-Based Instruction. International Journal of English Language & Translation Studies. 7(3). 142-
150.
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in the assessment process of their writings (2000) model whereas the control group
can make them become more attentive to students were taught traditionally. The
formal and textual characteristics and results indicated that the experimental group
thereby enhancing their writing. The outperformed the control group in terms of
participants of the study were 40 TEFL their global writing ability as well as in their
postgraduate students who were taking the performance on the writing sub-skills of
“Advanced Writing Course” at an Iranian focus, development, organization,
university. The participants were randomly conventions and word choice. Likewise,
assigned to the control and experimental Meihami, Husseini, and Sahragard (2018)
groups after their homogeneity was ensured investigated the impact of giving corrective
by a Preliminary English Test and a writing feedback via portfolio-based writing
exam. To accomplish the objectives of the instruction on the global and writing
study, both groups were taught according to performance along with its components. In
process-oriented instruction using the so doing, 44 intermediate Iranian EFL
identical teaching materials. The participants learners took part in an L2 writing program
also received interactive feedback, peer- as the participants of the study. They were
editing, and teacher‟s feedback on their randomly divided into the experimental
writing tasks. Additionally, the experimental group (N = 20) who received the corrective
group was engaged in regular portfolio feedback on their writing via the portfolio-
assessment of their wiring. The findings based writing, and the control group (N =
revealed that the experimental group 24) who were taught traditionally through
outperformed the control group in writing receiving paper-and-pen corrective feedback
post-test and were able to produce more on their writing. The findings of the study
accurate and complex texts. revealed that the experimental group
As a recent study carried out in Iranian substantially performed better than the
context, Fathi and Khodabakhsh (2019) control group both in global and
investigated the impact of self-assessment componential writing performance. The
and peer-assessment, as alternative reason for this outperformance was
assessment types, on writing performance of attributed to the characteristics that
Iranian EFL learners. A sample of 46 portfolio-based writing offers to the L2
English major learners who were the writing classroom such as increasing the
students of two intact classes acted as the motivation of the L2 learners to write,
participants of this study. The two classes fostering their autonomy, reflection, and
were randomly assigned to a self-assessment consciousness about their own writing
group who were taught to self-assess their process.
writings and a peer-assessment group who 3. Methodology
were trained to assess the writings of their 3.1 Participants
peers. Their study lasted for a period of one To fulfill the purpose of this research,
university semester. The data were collected a number of 46 Iranian EFL learners
by two timed-writing essays given as the participated in the present study. In fact, the
pre-test and post-test of the intervention. The participants were students of two intact
results of this study indicated that both self- classes in an Iranian language center. They
assessment and peer-assessment were were both male and female students whose
conducive in enhancing the writing skills of age varied from 19 to 24 with the mean age
the EFL learners. In another study, Obeiah of 22.13. The two classes were randomly
and Bataineh (2016) investigated the effect assigned to an experimental group (N = 22)
of portfolio assessment on Jordanian EFL and a control group (N = 24). The
learners‟ global writing performance as well experimental group was taught through
as their performance on the components of portfolio-based writing instruction while the
focus, development, organization, control group received the traditional writing
conventions and word choice. The study was instruction. The purpose of the educational
carried out using a quasi-experimental in course was to improve students‟ writing
which an experimental group (N=20) and a competencies in essay writing. The course
control group (N=20) from tenth grade lasted for 18 sessions. The participants were
classes at the public schools for girls of intermediate level of language
participated in the study. For the purpose of proficiency. To check the homogeneity of
this study, the experimental group students the two classes in terms of global language
were taught on how to create ideas, proficiency “Oxford Placement Test” (OPT)
structure, draft, and revise their written tasks (Allan, 2004) was administered to the
according to Hamp-Lyons and Condon‟s
participants of the control and experimental write an essay on that topic within the
groups. allotted time. Then for the purpose of the
3.2 Instruments present study, the experimental group
3.2.1 Language Proficiency Test students were instructed by receiving regular
Since general language proficiency of feedbacks through their portfolios whereas
the participants affects their writing the control group was taught traditionally
performance, first the participants should be and received regular corrective feedbacks by
homogenized in terms of global English the same instructor. The two classes were
proficiency. As a result, Oxford Placement taught by the same instructor who covered
Test (OPT) was given to both groups in the same materials. The purpose of the
order to check the homogeneity of the course was to make the students become
students in terms of their general English familiar with basic writing competencies
proficiency. OPT is argued to be the proper they needed for paragraph writing and essay
test to determine the English proficiency writing. Different types of paragraphs were
level of any number of learners at all levels taught each session and the students were
(Allan, 2004). OPT consists of a 6 rating required to do the tasks assigned by the
scale; testees whose score fall between 0-17 instructor. The students were required to
are labeled as basic (A1), and testees whose write essays of about 250 words at home as
scores fall between 18-29 are viewed as their assignments and then submit their
elementary students (A2). Those whose assignments in the following sessions. The
scores lie between 30 and 39 are in the lower teacher reviewed the written essays and gave
intermediate group (B1). Those with the corrective feedbacks on different aspects
scores of 40-47, are considered as upper like vocabulary, grammar, organization,
intermediate (B2) and the students with the content, and mechanics. Afterwards, the
scores 48-54, and 54-60 are labeled as students were required to correct and revise
advanced (C1) and very sophisticated (C2) their essays according to the teachers‟
levels respectively. The internal consistency corrective feedbacks and resubmit their
of OPT as measured by Cronbach‟s alpha essays to the teacher. The teacher read the
turned out to be 0.84 in this study. revised essays and provided the final
3.2.2 Timed-Writing Tasks comments on them and students were
The dependent variable of the study required to implement the needed changes as
was writing performance. To assess the requested by the teacher until their essays
writing performance of the participants become totally approved by the teacher. The
before and after the treatment, two 40- approved essays of the students were
minute writing essays were given to the archived by the teacher as their portfolios.
participants of both groups. In so doing, two Five topics were covered during the whole
general topics were given for each semester which lasted for 18 sessions. When
administration. students submitted a new essay, the teacher
Topic 1: Your school has enough money to added that essay to their portfolios.
purchase either computers for students or The same materials, tasks, and topics
books for the library. Which should your were assigned to the control group students.
school choose to buy - computers or books? However, these students did not receive
Use specific reasons and examples to successive feedbacks, drafting, redrafting
support your recommendation. and revisions which were carried out in the
Topic 2: Do you agree or disagree with the experimental group. In other words, the
following statement? A person's childhood teacher gave corrective feedbacks to
years (the time from birth to twelve years of students only once and the students were
age) are the most important years of a required to revise their written essays just
person's life. Use specific reasons and based on those corrective feedbacks. Also,
examples to support your answer. the teacher did not keep portfolios for each
3.3 Procedure student. Therefore, the students of the
Before beginning the intervention of control group were able to write further
this study, OPT was given to the students of essays during the course.
both classes so as to their homogeneity is Finally, at the end of the course the
ensured. Afterwards, the first essay task students of both control and experimental
(pre-test topic) was given to the participants. groups were required to write an essay on
The scores of participants on these essays topic b within the allocated time. The scores
served as the pre-test scores of both groups. obtained from these written essays were the
The students in both groups were required to post-test scores of the participants.
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