Nowadays, human beings should take overall responsibility for saving the

planet by changing the way we obtain energy from natural resources.

Despite the fact that some options are possible, there are two alternatives
which could draw our attention: wind turbines and solar panels. Needless
to say, it does not mean that the other one is not important so as to have
a sustainable planet, but which one is the second to none?
First of all, solar panels are essential due to the fact that we are able to
get out for the sun endless energy which is everywhere during the whole
year. In addition, not only is the idea feasible to work on it, but it is also
the best option when running out of basic resources such as once we get
run out of water, oil, etc. That being said, it is relevant to focus on what is
actually functional and harmless to The Earth.
One the other hand, wind turbines might play a vital role in the topic we
are concerned about since they are useful to turn wind into different kinds
of energies. However, it is not feasible even to place the turbines
anywhere on the grounds that they are so big nor expecting to have the
necessary wind force to move these huge machines.
So, taking into account the above information, I would say that solar
panels seem like more a reliable solution because we can currently see
how sun energy is positively changing the world without finding any
drawback that may undermine its potential.
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Nowadays, human beingS PLURAL REQUIRED IN USE should take overall

responsibility for saving the planet by changing the way we obtain energy
from natural resources. Despite the fact that some options are possible,
there are two alternatives which should COULD IS BETTER BECAUSE THIS
IS NOT MORAL ADVICE draw our attention: wind turbines and solar
panels. Needless to say, it does not mean that the other one is not
important so as to have a sustainable planet, but which one is the second
to none?
First of all, solar panels are essential due to the fact that we can get out
for the sun endless energy which is everywhere during the whole year. In
addition, not only is the idea feasible to work on it, but it is also the best
option once we get run out of water, oil, etc. WHEN RUNNING OUT OF
BASIC RESOURCES SUCH AS …. That being said, it is relevant to focus on
what is actually functional and harmless to The Earth.
One the other hand, wind turbines might play a vital role in the topic we
are concerned about since they are useful to turn wind into different kinds
of energies. However, weWHY “ WE” ( IMPERSONAL STYLE cannot even
consider to place the turbines anywhere on the ground that they are so
big nor expecting to have the necessary wind force to move these huge
machines.
So, taking into account the above information, I would say that solar
panels seem like more a reliable solution on the ground that
we can currently see how sun energy is positively changing the world
without finding any drawback that may undermine its potential.
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