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Any terms that need to be defined: stakeholders(government, employers, higher education institutions and
graduates); employability; development.
Your position on the topic (this should become Student employability skills → (related to)→employers.
your thesis statement): Stronger employability skills prior to lower employability.
1.Students, 2.universities,3. employers
Main body paragraph 1,2 students Graduate(final year students); (Paragraph1)
Main idea for this paragraph (this will become Undergraduate(first and second year students);(Paragraph2)
the topic sentence): Students→Many employability skills development (personality attributes, higher
education(can be developed), in the university(not sure)) .
Supporting information/details/ examples: Personal attributes can be developed→highly individual traits are deep
rooted(early age) →determine success, performance, career choices, others.
Reference you will use to support your ideas: Tymon, A. (2013:) ‘The student perspective on Employability’ studies in Higher
Education. Vol.29(6), 841-856 Commented [张1]: Write page number and part of quote to
help you
Supporting information/details/ examples: Developing student identity with skills →To make them ready for employment
after university(PPI); prepare students which profession they want to choose(HE-
community of practice, landscape).
Reference you will use to support your ideas: O'Leary and Jackson (2017) ‘Re-conceptualising graduate employability: student
identity and the importance of pre-professional identity’ higher education
research & development. Vol.35(5), 925-939
Main body paragraph 4 employers Employers→have the technical and disciplinary skills, including:teamwork,
Main idea for this paragraph (this will become communication, leadership, critical thinking, problem solving and management
the topic sentence): skills.
Supporting information/details/ examples: operation of new graduates in the workplace. Employer→graduates(to have
specific skills such as logical thinking, fast learning, communication skills,
flexibility, ambition, high motivation, creativity, critical thinking, initiative,
teamwork and time management.)
Reference you will use to support your ideas: Dwesini, N.(2017) ‘The role of Work-Integrated Learning(WIL) in enhancing
employability skills’ African Journal of Hospitality, Tourism and Leisure,
Vol.6(2), 2223-814x