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Introduction:

In many countries today, an effective education system is often seen as the key social
institution that will help in a nation’s development. For this reason, many governments
are willing to spend time and resources in ensuring that their countries have the best
education system that they can afford so that the youths in their countries are able to
benefit from it. However, despite the best efforts from the governments, some people
claimed that the education system is unable to prepare young people for the future
because the education system is unable to change as fast as what companies’ require
their potential employees to know and understand in the workplace. On the contrary,
many have argued that the education systems in most countries are able to help young
people secure their futures because schools are able to help them discover and develop
their talents which youths can use to find their own paths in life. Therefore, despite the
challenges the education system faces in the modern world today, I believe that schools
are doing enough to ensure that young people can be prepared for what lies ahead of
them in their lives.

Paragraph 1 (elaborate first)


Firstly, many people claim that the education system is well-prepared to help young
people to achieve their future ambitions because many schools today have the ability to
help young people discover and develop their talents in school. By discovering and
developing their talents early in schools, young people perhaps can use their talents to
help them achieve their ambitions later in life. As the world becomes increasing
competitive, it is important for people to have some unique skills or talents in order to
help them stand out from the rest. This is especially important when many people are
being educated in many countries around the world. Schools are the most ideal places
to help students discover their talents as there are many opportunities that students can
explore what their passions are, and have the events that allow them to further hone
their abilities. Governments are also funding schools and training teachers to help their
students to discover and develop the students’ talents. We can see this in the variety of
CCAs that are available in schools today that allow students to participate and develop
their leadership and creativity skills. These skills are useful for their futures as they are
able to use these skills and talents to help them achieve their dreams by turning them in
businesses. Therefore, we can argue that schools are prepared to help young people
achieve their dreams in the future by helping them to discover and develop their talents.
(paragraph 2 – example first)
Firstly, schools are doing well in preparing young people for their futures because
schools are very capable in teaching the latest skills and knowledge to youths in order
that they can find jobs in the future. (What example do you have?) We can see this in
Singapore, where the Ministry of Education works closely with businesses in developing
coding and computing classes’ syllabus so that students will have a basic
understanding of computing and coding. These skills are crucial as they enter the
workplace in the coming decades as many jobs need people to be proficient in these
skills. (What does the example show about the Topic sentence?) This example
highlights how developed countries like Singapore are doing to ensure that the
education system remains relevant to the needs of the workplace. By working closely
with industries and other relevant organisations, many developed countries’
governments will try to devote resources into equipping schools with the necessary
technologies to aid in the teaching of students the skills needed for future workplaces.
Also, resources are given the train teachers in the latest technological trends so that
they are better able to teach their students such knowledge needed in the future. With
all these things done, it is reasonable to suggest that schools are doing enough to help
youths be better prepared for the future.

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