How should a statement of purpose for Masters in

Data science be?

First of all , you need to better focus the content of your SOP in order to create a
more  chronological discussion for the reviewer. If you can map out your purpose in a
logical order, the reviewer will tend to better connect your information and quite
possibly, allow him to remember more important and highlight points of your statement.

Make sure that you state the purpose of your desire for higher study immediately. In
your current version, this does not come in until almost the end of your essay. That is
never the place where the the purpose should be positioned. That is always mentioned
as early as possible within the essay. The first paragraph will be the best place to explain
this.

In paragraph 2 you must explain what your current work position is and how it relates to
your plans for your career future. This is the point where you should explain how you
see  big data  becoming an integral part of future business and other fields. Segue this
statement into a transition for your college background in the third paragraph.

The third paragraph should summarize your college education and any accolades or

awards that you received during this time. All the information, including the awards
should relate to your current career. If possible, transition into any additional training
that you have received, including your most recent. Remember, explain how these are all
relevant to your interest in big data and why it will help you become a better MS student
in the field of Data Science.

Your fourth paragraph should give an overview of your immediate short term plans.

Covering 5 years. Don't go too far into the long term because that will require even more
additional study on your part which may no longer be included in the coverage of your
MS course.

Finally, make sure to drive home the point as to why you have chosen this particular
university and why no other university can help you achieve your course objectives. It
may help if you have a clear path towards a potential research question regarding big
data that you can pursue as a student at the university. If you can exemplify how you will
utilize the university facilities or work with their professors to help you develop the
response to your question, the university might consider your application more seriously
than they would have without it. This advice only applies if you are enrolling in a thesis
based masters degree. It is not required for non-thesis programs.

Thus, it is really important to have a stronger Statement of Purpose . Make sure it is not
plagiarized and written with multiple revisions in it before submitting .