Opinion ESSAY

A growing number of children are participating in talent and reality shows on TV. Some
people regard this as an opportunity for youngsters to exhibit their skills and talents and
believe it will enable them to become successful professionals later in life. However, others
claim that it is unethical to exploit children for entertainment purposes. What is your opinion
on this issue?

Pros of talent shows Cons

 Youngsters will be on the spotlight  From a psychological viewpoint,

(gain fame) / into the limelight
 Money
 Become mature – responsible earlier on
children are not mature enough to
accept rejection- judges’ comments
 Children neglect their homework –
school tasks as they have a heavy
schedule

Recently there has been a significant (σημαντικος) increase in TV talent shows and it seems
that the participants are getting younger and younger. On the one hand, parents push their
children into the limelight in the belief that they help them with their future career. On the
other hand, psychologists warn parents about the possible trauma of their participation. As
far as I am concerned (In my opinion), this tendency (τάση) should be discouraged
(αποθαρρύνω)

(MAIN BODY)

To begin with, as regards youngsters’ psychological state it is worthwhile (αξιοσημείωτο ) to

mention that children are not mature enough to handle rejection. (TOPIC SENTENCE-
ΚΕΝΤΡΙΚΗ ΙΔΕΑ) Τo be more specific,( In particular, Particularly, to be more precise) the
judges’ comments may be too harsh for the tender(sensitive) and fragile psychology of a
child. A judge who continually points out (talks about) a child’s missing talent, may make it
feel inferior or not enough compared to the other children. Therefore (συνεπώς), talent
shows are not ideal for youngsters. ( conclusion- κατακλείδα)

On the other hand, it is believed that children’s participation in such shows would make them
more mature and responsible. A youngster that participates in such contests works on his
skills on a day-to- day basis and at the same time (simultaneously) develops as a person. He
learns to be responsible for the tasks he has to execute and realises that he has to show
some kind of improvement in front of the audience and the judges. Therefore, his
participation gives him discipline; a characteristic that proves to be significant later on in
adult life.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that children should not take part in such shows as the
psychological aspect is the most important of all.

Essay topic: Many parents with talented teenagers do their utmost to exploit these talents
and put their children on the road to fame. These parents insist that this offers their
offspring great opportunities, guaranteed professional careers and financial security as
adults. However, opponents (αντίπαλοι) maintain (διατείνομαι) that adolescents are put under
too much pressure too early in their lives. What is your opinion on the issue?

Pros – cons of fame for teenagers

Pros of fame Cons of fame

 Gain popularity- increase self-
esteem(your self-esteem is increased -
your confidence is boosted )
 Increase your income (εισόδημα)
 You ensure better living conditions –
successful future
 There is no privacy because the
paparazzi chase you to capture your
personal moments
 Your stress levels are on the increase
and this may even lead you to
depression. There have been numerous
cases of celebrities who committed
suicide because they could not handle
this pressure- anxiety –stress.
 You miss out on teenage experiences as
you are forced to lead an adult
lifestyle (διάγω βίο –lead a life) and
you are surrounded by people who try
to exploit you and not protect you.

Introduction

A growing number of teenagers are emerging (εμφανιζομαι στο προσκήνιο)as stars and
entertainers , having been pushed into limelight by parents who are ambitious on their
behalf. Such parents are convinced that they are assisting their children in building a
brighter future for themselves, securing fame, fortune and fulfilment. As far as I am
concerned, this tendency should be discouraged.

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