Portfolio File #6: WRITING MY OWN OUTLINE IN CLASS

NAME:Mariana Hormaza López GROUP: 5

Write short sentences. Remember this is a skeleton of you paper, NOT the whole essay! Do not include connectors
and aim at writing single lines (not several) at this point.
Today, the Internet has become one of the main entertainment methods for people of all societies
Hook to communicate, make friends and find various interesting videos. However, when parents cannot
control the use that their children give their cell phone, the cell phone becomes a real problem.
The teenagers are having unrestricted and unsupervised access to the internet and social
Issue
networks.
Introduction

1. Low self-esteem
Background (2 causes of
the issue) 2. Loneliness and / or isolation from peers

Thesis Statement (Main
problem + 2 sub-problems)
With this in mind, this essay seeks to analyze the effects of unrestricted and unsupervised access
to the Internet and social networks in adolescents, since this can cause loneliness and / or
isolation from their peers. Deception and, in the worst case, rape and death. And also a
significant reduction in school performance. In each case a solution will be proposed.

Sub problem 1 Significant reduction in school performance

Smartphones are considered the device most used by students and that interferes with their
Explanation/Supporting detail 1
study habits and concentration.
Body paragraph 1

Example 1
They neglect the time they dedicate to attending class, doing their homework, or sleeping the
necessary hours.
Parents and teachers
Who?
Solution 1 What? Establish rules and limits and find a way to integrate cell phone use into classroom learning
How? Establish schedules for the use of the cell phone and doing educational activities on the cell
phone as in Kahoot

Resulting sentence Improvement of school performance

Sub problem 2 Cheat in the worst case, rape and death.

Among the passive risks that threaten minors is involuntary access to certain content not
Explanation/Supporting detail 2
Body paragraph 2

appropriate for their age that circulates on the Internet and situations in which minors.
Example 2 They become the target of malicious behavior by third parties.

Who? Parents
Solution 2 What? Encourage young people to cultivate their talents and interests
How? Incorporate new activities into your daily routine

Resulting sentence Better use of time

*Although you are not required to use in-text citations in the essay, you do need to list the sources consulted below.
References:
1. https://blog.colegiowilliams.edu.mx/cuales-son-peligros-redes-sociales-adolescentes
2. https://www.universia.net/mx/actualidad/orientacion-academica/como-afectan-redes-sociales-rendimiento-
academico-1163323.html
3. https://www.redalyc.org/pdf/819/81931771008.pdf