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A business needs different communication styles for different audiences. Fine tuning your language can make a big difference. A recent trip to vietnam revealed small misunderstandings. The flaws were many: excessively verbose sentences, speaking too quickly, the use of colloquialisms and the use of slang.
A business needs different communication styles for different audiences. Fine tuning your language can make a big difference. A recent trip to vietnam revealed small misunderstandings. The flaws were many: excessively verbose sentences, speaking too quickly, the use of colloquialisms and the use of slang.
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A business needs different communication styles for different audiences. Fine tuning your language can make a big difference. A recent trip to vietnam revealed small misunderstandings. The flaws were many: excessively verbose sentences, speaking too quickly, the use of colloquialisms and the use of slang.
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Clarity in Words David Brewster - Freelance Writing
www.clarityinwords.com.au
WHAT WE’VE ARE YOUR CUSTOMERS FAILING TO GET THE PICTURE?
BEEN UP TO Fine tuning can make a big difference
On a recent trip to Vietnam I our own tongue. And how impor- CASE STUDY – WORDS found myself sitting in a hotel tant it is to modify our language Occasionally I have the pleasure lobby for a few minutes. With to suit our audience. This is all of doing a number of different nothing else to do, I eaves- the more important in business. jobs for a client over a lengthy dropped on the conversations When we are at work, most of period. This is very enjoyable for taking place between staff and us speak a customised version of me because I get to know the guests at reception. (Beware the our language. Some – computer client better and feel like a part bored writer.) people and economists, for of their team. It is also useful for As I listened, small misun- instance – use a different dialect the client because, over time, all derstandings seemed to creep altogether. Whatever our game, their materials read with a more into nearly every conversation I we bandy around industry terms, consistent ‘feel’. heard across the reception desk. abbreviations and acronyms, PFG Money, a fast growing Check out times, payment terms, partly for efficiency and partly financial services company based tour arrangements, laundry que- because they give the impression in Melbourne’s west, is one such ries … you name it. The most that we know what we’re talking client. Over the past year I have straightforward query would about. created words for two websites, bounce out of control like a This is fine in the privacy of various brochures aimed at fumbled catch in the outfield. our own cubicle, but it is danger- potential clients, agents and What was interesting, I ous elsewhere – especially when partners, and a corporate pro- realised after a while, was that the we need to be understood by posal, amongst other things. confusion was rarely caused by newer colleagues, customers and the (quite understandable) potential customers. PFG Money are a good example limitations of the local staff’s The bottom line: if you want of a business needing different English. Rather, fault tended to to be understood, whether you communication styles for lie with the native English are communicating across a re- different audiences. speaker’s failure to adjust their ception desk or via your website, For instance, PFG Money’s main language to the circumstances. make the effort to adapt your product is international money The flaws were many. vernacular to suit the situation. transfer, with many customers Amongst them were excessively coming from immigrant popula- verbose sentences, speaking too Overused tions. The language for materials quickly, the use of colloquialisms “Outcome...” aimed at this audience is pitched and the use of difficult words. To This word needs ten years in quite differently from, say, a use a tennis analogy: the English the dungeon. Politicians and partnership proposal for a cor- speakers were playing like sea- CEOs would be lost for words, but porate head office. soned players, hitting the ball to that may be a good thing. every corner of the court. Then Try ‘result’, ‘finish’, ‘conclu- they wondered why their less sion’ or ‘ending’. Instead of effect- www.pfgmoney.com practiced opponents seemed so ing a better outcome, just make www.pfgatm.com.au inept at returning their shots. things better. And if, God forbid, info@pfgmoney.com I was reminded of just how a misstep on your behalf causes a much we take for granted the negative outcome, be brave and 1300 557 817 ability to communicate easily in admit that you stuffed up.
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