1- Watch you presentation and answer the following questions.

Name & Topic The party on my village in summer.

Presentation Did you use any resources? Yes, I did.

Where the resources relevant and attractive? Yes, the power
point.
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Body Did you look at your audience most of the time? Yes, but

sometimes a little.
language and Did you read from you notes? I read a little from my notes.
eye contact Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of
your audience? Yes, I did gestures and movement
because I I have nervous.
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Structure Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes, I
organize my ideas in order the importance.
Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more
clear? Yes, I use first, then, finally,…
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Content Did you introduce interesting, NEW information to your
audience? Yes, I did.
Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the
Internet/books..? Yes, I search information in the
internet.
Was you information more superficial or more detailed
and original? My information was superficial but also
detailed.
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Language Did you use check your grammar? (verbs, word order…)
Yes, I did.
Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary?
Yes, some words.
Did you use sentence linkers? Yes, I use and, also, but, and
the others.
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Pronunciation Did you know how to pronounce all you words? Did you
& Intonationcheck the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the
teacher? Yes, I know how to pronounce.
Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone
all the time? No, I didn’t. Did you speed in a fluid
continuum or with breaks and interruptions? Yes,
 sometimes I did interruptions and breaks.
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Self- You are you teacher! What mark did you get?? 7.
Evaluation

2- Write down a LITERAL TRANSCRIPTION of you presentation.

Hello everybody! Today I will talk about the mistreating of women

because I think that is a very important thing nowadays. There are
some men who have mistreating but there are more women that man
who suffer this, and this is the reason that I will talk about mistreating
of women. First I will talk about the batterers, after the types of
mistreating, the advice to prevent of batterer, the consequences and
other information.
The batterer, the batterer of the couple is isn’t an ill man, it’s man
who learned as a child that women are inferior to them and aa who
has demonstrate who gives the orders.
This people need a re-education not only now, but before that
happened aa in centuries ago and it continues now and in different
centuries.
There are different types of mistreating, the psychological, the
physical abuse, the social, economical and the a sexual. The
psychological abuse, the physiological there are all those behaviors
that produce aa devaluation and suffering to the to the woman. For
example: the threats, the demands of of humiliations, of of ai
obedience, demand of obedience, They are also the insults, the
control of going out of home, humiliations in public and more. The
physical abuse is the not accidental attack, a that he provokes or they
can produce aa damage to the body of the woman. Aa The sexual is
the is a imposition to the woman a sexual relation against her will.
The social, the social is an isolation of women from her family and
friends and not allowing the contact with these. And Finally The
economical, the economical the victim does not have access to
economic means aa since the mistreating person a controls these,
even though she is independent economically.
Advice to prevent the batterer, aa One of the things that we can do
for advice to prevent the batterer is to educate the the new
generations, tell us that the man and woman are the same and all
have a the same opportunity and rights. and
In this way when the boys are big they will that not see to the women
inferior to them. The consequences of violence there are different
consequences, for example grief, insomnia, anxiety, aa permanent
fatigue, changes of mood, a pain pain in the joints, sadness because
they believe nothing is worth it, depression, and more.
Other information, a other information the 60% of men who have
been accused of domestic violence aa turns the attack on his wife or
girlfriend. aam
The ill treated women make eleven accusations every day in
Catalonia, and in Spain made one hundred and thirty acustations. Half
the people that aa are mistreated are her husband, or ex-husband. or
her boyfriend. Aa Spain stands in the fifth place of Europe that in the
number of deaths from mistreating and after there are Germany,
Rumania, United Kingdom and Poland. And well, I will have finished
my oral presentation and I hope that you like it. And Have you got any
questions?

Check you Language and Structure. Can you correct you mistakes?

Hello class! Today I will talk about mistreating of women because I

think that is a very important thing nowadays. There are some men
who receive mistreating but there are more women that man who
suffer this, and this is the reason that I will talk about mistreating of
women. First I will talk about the batterers, after the types of
mistreating, the advice to prevent the batterer, the consequences and
other information.

The batterers:

The batterer of the couple isn't an ill person, it is a man who learned
as a child that women are inferior to them and who has to
demonstrate who gives the orders.
People need a re-education not only now, but before that happened
centuries ago and it continues now and in certain cultures. The
batterer is not conscious that he was doing a bad thing when he was
mistreating the couple.

Types of mistreating

We can find different types of mistreating, the physical abuse,

psychological, sexual, social and economical.
The psychological: There are all those behaviours that produce
devaluation and suffering to the woman. For example: the threats, the
demands of obedience, humiliations. They are also the insults, the
control of going out of home, humiliations in public......
The physical abuse: There is the non accidental attack, that he
provokes or they can produce damage to the body of the woman.
The sexual: Is the imposition to the woman a sexual relation against
her will.
The social: Is an isolation of the woman from her family and friends
not allowing the contact with these.
The economical: The victim does not have access to economic
means since the mistreating person controls these, even though she
is independent economically.

In the majority of cases women don’t complain about the abuse

because of fear.

Advice to prevent the batterer

One of the things that they do to avoid the batterer is to educate the
new generations, tell us that the man and woman are the same and
all have the same opportunity and rights.
In this way when the boys are big they will not see to the girls inferior
to them

Consequences

The violence can lead to different consequences, for example anxiety,

grief, insomnia, permanent fatigue, pain the joints, changes of mood,
sadness because they believe nothing is worth it, depression,…

Other information

60% of men who have been accused of domestic violence turns the
attack on his wife or girlfriend.
The ill treated women make eleven accusations every day in
Catalonia, and in Spain one hundred and thirty people. Half the
people that are mistreated are her husband or boyfriend or ex-
husband.
Spain stands in the fifth place of Europe in the number of deaths from
mistreating after Germany, Rumania, United Kingdom and Poland.

Well, I have finished my oral presentation and I hope that you like it.
Have you got any questions?