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John Jones 333 Third Avenue ABC City, XY Email: 5551212@MAIL.COM Primary Phone: Cell Phone: Work Phone:
Email: 5551212@MAIL.COM Primary Phone: N/A Wrong-footed Objective. The highlighted parts below are all about you and your needsa Cell Phone: N/A sure way to alienate employers who have a stackPhone: humble candidates to choose Work of more N/A from. Here and elsewhere, adopt this mindset: How can I help you, Mr./Ms. Employer? OBJECTIVE: A challenging IT position in a company that supports creativity and growth opportunity in the workplace. EXPERIENCE: 11/2000-Present Too much text! Text this dense hurts readability. Its like putting speed bumps at the start of the Indy 500. Use bullet points here and elsewhere, for easier reading (and better results).

Maximum Professional Services - Denver, CO Contracted to Hewlett-Packard as a front line support NT 4.0/2000 server administrator on an enterprise level. RESPONSIBILITIES: Monitor and troubleshoot over 1,000 WINNT 4.0/2000 E-commerce, and production class Intranet/Extranet servers dealing with system availability, and connectivity. Create user/group shares and accounts that are local to servers. Modify and provide access permissions to shared resources over the network. Troubleshoot DNS, TCP/IP, and NT web services connectivity issues. Monitor and troubleshoot backup failures, and system performance issues. Document planned/unplanned system down time and maintenance. Assist engineers from the next level of support with the installation of service packs and update of anti-virus software whenever necessary. U.S. Navy, CRPW MOCC EAST - Denver, CO Network Administrator Administrator of a 40-node local area network utilizing Windows NT primary domain model, integrated with a Novell Netware server for GroupWise E-mail access. Windows NT Server 4.0 provided DHCP-TCP/IP services for the intranet, as well as account validation, and management of shared resources. Windows NT Workstation 4.0 provided access to the domain. RESPONSIBILITIES: Administration of user groups, accounts, and shared resources. Establish personal and shared network storage for data and application files. Implement vendor specific hardware, and software upgrades. Perform data back-ups and restoration, and network performance monitoring. Troubleshoot all computers and peripherals tied into the LAN, as well as providing customer service support to the desktop level.

2/1998 - 11/2000 Responsibilities wont sell you to employers! Why? Everyone has them and is expected to execute them. Its results employers are looking for. How much time or money was saved or made when you did your job well? Did you meet or exceed all goals? Be specific.

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2/1998 - 11/2000 U.S. Navy, CRPW MOCC EAST - Denver, CO C4I/SR Systems/Network Administrator Administrator, and Information Systems Security Manager of a 7 node C4I/SR local area network consisting of 4 IBM 760/XD laptops running Windows NT Workstation 4.0 integrated with 3 Hewlett-Packard C200's running HP-UNIX, and a CISCO router which provides firewall security to the intranet via dedicated satellite channels. RESPONSIBILITIES: Administration of user groups, accounts, and shared resources using Windows Directory Services on laptops. Data back-up and restoration of NT, and Unix machines. Administration of user accounts on Unix machines. Install vendor and military specific hardware, and software upgrades, maintain and troubleshoot all peripherals attached to the LAN. 12/1994 - 12/1997 U.S. Navy, U.S.S. Enterprise (CVN-65) Denver, CO Data Systems Technician In charge of maintaining the UQX/5(V)9 Fast-Time-AnalyzerSystem (FTAS), and peripherals which consisted of 2 Sun Computers with a Sun/Solaris Unix operating system interfaced with two USH-31 reel to reel Magnetic tapetransports, and 6 signal processing modules (SP's). Dont overdo the dates. Also responsible for AN/UYK-43 computer set and peripherals, Why should dates be the RD-358/USH-26 magnet tape units, and the UYH-3 magnetic disk first thing readers see in pack unit. every section? Save space RESPONSIBILITIES: Performance of weekly, bi-weekly, and and put the focus on your monthly equipment integrity checks that included frequency, workplace achievements and voltage calibration, troubleshooting to component level, by putting dates later, off and repair/replacement of faulty circuit cards. to the right in each section. TEST EQUIPMENT USED: Frequency Modulators, RMS Meters, Frequency Counters, Sine-Wave Generators, Digital Oscilloscopes, Fluke Multi-Meters, and Megohmmeters. 12/1993 - 12/1994 U.S. Navy, U.S.S. ENTERPRISE (CVN-65) Denver, CO Network Administrator Helped design, implement, and administer the ship's first local area network in 1993 using Novell Netware 3.1, utilizing a Fiber-Optic Backbone with Fiber-Optic breakouts connecting over 150 nodes to the LAN. TEST EQUIPMENT USED: Fluke Multi-Meter, Optical Time Domain Reflectohmeter, Time Domain Reflectohmeter. 12/1992 - 12/1993 U.S. Navy, U.S.S. Enterprise (CVN-65) Denver, CO PC Repair Technician During my one-year stay in the PC repair shop, I successfully repaired over 60 PC's, 15 Monitors, and 20 Printers of various models and manufacturers.

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EDUCATION: 12/1999

Ameritrain "MCSE Boot-Camp" Denver, CO Received certificate of graduation from this aggressive, hands-on two week MCSE training course that covered every Microsoft WINNT 4.0 Core objective, with TCP/IP and Internet Information Server as the electives. JMCIS Maintenance - Fleet Combat Training Center, Denver, CO This course trained on the administration and maintenance aspect of the military's "Joint Maritime Command Information System". Course Highlights: Administration and Maintenance of Hewlett-Packard C200 CPU's utilizing HP-Unix for an operating system residing on a FDDI "Whisper net" backbone. Data Systems Technician A and C School - Denver, CO Course Highlights: Boolean algebra, advanced circuit logic, AC/DC theory, troubleshooting to component-level using flow charts, and schematics. Basic Micro-Soldering for component repair on circuit cards. Delete this section, which is filler and does nothing to sell you. Its understood that you have references. You can use that space to talk more about how you can help an employer.

02/1998

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REFERENCES: Available upon request.

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