A long time ago, a child was born to a queen and king and she was called Snow White.

When the queen died, the king married again. This new queen was wicked and hated Snow white. The queen gave orders that Snow White was to be treated as a servant. Snow White grew very beautiful and one day a Prince riding by, saw her at work and fell in love with her. The queen was beautiful too, and every day she asked her Magic Mirror, "Who is the fairest in the land?" and the mirror always answered, "You are the fairest one of all". But one day the mirror answered Snow White was the fairest in the land, and in a rage the queen gave orders to one of her Huntsmen to take Snow White into the woods and kill her. The Huntsman had a kind heart and couldn't do the deed so told her to run away. She fled into the woods where Seven little dwarfs lived. Their house was small and strange.

Snow White entered the little house and finding it very untidy, started to clean up. Upstairs she found seven little beds. She was very tired and stretching out on one of the beds, was soon asleep. When the Dwarfs came home they were surprised to find Snow White and after some argument, decided to let her stay. She promised to cook and look after them. The Queen discovered where Snow White was living and disguising herself as a witch, took a poisoned apple and set out for the Dwarfs cottage. She gave Snow White the poisoned apple to eat and as soon as she bit the apple, she sank into unconsciousness. Thinking she was dead, the Dwarfs built a glass coffin and put her in it. For days she lay in the forest in her glass coffin. One day, the Prince was riding through the forest looking for Snow White and found her. He leaned over and kissed her. She opened her eyes and sat up with a smile. Everyone was happy. The Prince took Snow White to his palace where they were married and lived happily ever after.

Narrative Cinderella Story (English - Indonesia)

In English Cinderella Once upon a time, there was a girl called Cinderella. Cinderella is lived happily with her mother and father until her mother died. Feel that Cinderella needs a mother figure in his life, Cinderellas father remarries to a woman who has two daughters of her own. Unfortunately, Cinderella's father dies and she lived only with her stepmother and stepsisters. They were very bossy, she had to do all the housework. One day on invitation to the hall come to the family. The King invited for all the eligible ladies in the kingdom so as to find Prince a wife. Her stepsisters would no let her go. Cinderella was sad. The stepsisters went to the hall without her. Fortunately, the fairy Godmother came and helped her to get to the hall with the wave of magic wand, helped prepared Cinderella for the hall. The fairy does warn her that is magic will end at a stroke of midnight, so she must leaved the hall before than. At the hall all people surprised when Cinderella arrived. And then the Prince invited Cinderella to danced. He fell in love with her. All of a sudden, the clock star to chime that is a midnight. Cinderella hastily runs away, dropped a glass slipper as she does so. Cinderella escapes, with nothing from the night left, except from the other glass slipper, which had not changed back. Prince Charming orders his love to be found by means of the odd shoe, and the Grand Duke is sent around the land getting every girl in the land to try on the glass slipper to see if it fits. Eventually the Grand Duke reaches the residence of Cinderella, but she is nowhere to be seen. The stepsisters frantically try to get the glass slipper to fit so as to wed into royalty, but compatible nothing that. The Grand Duke is about to leave as Cinderella finally appears. He orders the messenger to brought forth the glass slipper, yet the stepmother in a last minute attempt to prevent her stepdaughter from

better things, causes the messenger to trip, thus broken the fragile shoe into pieces. Yet the arrogant woman hadn't betted on Cinderella produced the other glass slipper, which fits onto Cinderella's foot perfectly. Very soon, wedding bells ring, and Cinderella married her prince, and they live happily ever after. In Indonesian Cinderella Pada suatu ketika, ada seorang anak perempuan yang dipanggil dengan nama Cinderella. Cinderella hidup bahagia dengan Ibu dan Ayahnya sampai Ibunya meninggal. Merasa bahwa Cinderella membutuhkan gambaran seorang ibu di hidupnya, Ayah Cinderella menikah lagi dengan seorang perempuan yang mempunyai dua anak perempuan kandung. Sayangnya, Ayah Cinderella meninggal dan dia hanya tinggal dengan saudara-saudara tiri dan ibu tirinya. Mereka sangat suka memerintah, dia harus melakukan semua pekerjaan rumah tangga. Suatu hari undangan menuju aula datang kepada keluarga itu. Raja mengundang untuk semua wanita yang dapat dipilih di dalam kerajaan untuk mencarikan Pangeran seorang isteri. Saudara saudara tirinya tidak mengijinkan dia pergi. Cinderella sedih. Saudara saudara tirinya pergi ke aula itu tanpa dia. Untungnya, Ibu Peri datang dan membantunya untuk datang ke aula dengan bantuan lambaian tongkat ajaib, yang membantu Cinderella menyiapkan diri untuk pergi ke aula itu. Ibu Peri memperingatkannya sihir itu akan berakhir dengan segera pada tengah malam, maka dia harus meninggalkan aula sebelum itu. Di aula semua orang-orang kagum ketika Cinderella tiba. Kemudian Pangeran mengajak Cinderella untuk menari. Ia jatuh cinta kepadanya. Tanpa disadari, bintang jam untuk menunjukkan itu adalah tengah malam. Cinderella dengan tergesa-gesa berlari pergi menjatuhkan salah satu sepatu kaca yang dipakainya. Cinderella bebas, tidak ada apapun yang tertinggal dari malam itu, kecuali salah satu sepatu kaca, yang tidak berubah bentuk. Pangeran memerintah agar cintanya ditemukan dengan menggunakan petunjuk sepatu yang aneh, dan Adipati dikirim di wilayah sekitar untuk menemui setiap anak perempuan di dalam wilayah untuk mencoba memakai sepatu kaca itu dan melihat jika itu sesuai. Secepatnya Adipati menjangkau tempat kediaman Cinderella, tetapi dia tidak terlihat dimanapun. Para saudara perempuan tirinya yang dengan kebingungan mencoba sepatu kaca itu agar cocok supaya mendapatkan sayembara pernikahan itu, tetapi tidak ada dari mereka yang cocok. Adipati baru akan meninggalkan tempat ketika Cinderella yang akhirnya nampak. Ia meminta pesuruh untuk mengeluarkan sepatu kaca itu, namun ibu tiri di suatu detik terakhir mencoba untuk mencegah, anak tiri perempuannya dari berbagai hal lebih baik, menyebabkan pesuruh jatuh ketika berjalan, dengan begitu hancurlah sepatu yang mudah pecah menjadi berkeping - keping. Namun perempuan yang angkuh tidak pernah menyangka bahwa Cinderella mengeluarkan sepatu kaca lainnya, yang sesuai dengan ke kaki Cinderella dengan sempurna. Segera, lonceng perkawinan berbunyi, Cinderella menikah dengan pangerannya, dan mereka hidup dengan bahagia selama - lamanya.

Diposkan oleh Chilla Aryadinata di Sabtu, Maret 27, 2010 Label: Narrative Cinderella Story (English - Indonesia) Reaksi:

CINDERELLA Once upon a time, there was a young girl named Cinderella. She lived with her step mother and two step sisters. The step mother and sisters were conceited and bad tempered. They treated Cinderella very badly. Her step mother made Cinderella do the hardest works in the house; such as scrubbing the floor, cleaning the pot and pan and preparing the food for the family. The two step sisters, on the other hand, did not work about the house. Their mother gave them many handsome dresses to wear. One day, the two step sister received an invitation to the ball that the kings son was going to give at the palace. They were excited about this and spent so much time choosing the dresses they would wear. At last, the day of the ball came, and away went the sisters to it. Cinderella could not help crying after they had left. Why are crying, Cinderella? a voice asked. She looked up and saw her fairy godmother standing beside her, because I want so much to go to the ball said Cinderella. Well said the godmother,youve been such a cheerful, hardworking, uncomplaining girl that I am going to see that you do go to the ball. Magically, the fairy godmother changed a pumpkin into a fine coach and mice into a coachman and two footmen. Her godmother tapped Cinderellas raged dress with her wand, and it became a beautiful ball gown. Then she gave her a pair of pretty glass slippers. Now, Cinderella, she said; You must leave before midnight. Then away she drove in her beautiful coach. Cinderella was having a wonderfully good time. She danced again and again with the kings son. Suddenly the clock began to strike twelve, she ran toward the door as quickly as she could. In her hurry, one of her glass slipper was left behind. A few days later, the king son proclaimed that he would marry the girl whose feet fitted the glass slipper. Her step sisters tried on the slipper but it was too small for them, no matter how hard they squeezed their toes into it. In the end, the kings page let Cinderella try on the slipper. She stuck out her foot and the page slipped the slipper on. It fitted perfectly. Finally, she was driven to the palace. The kings son was overjoyed to see her again. They were married and live happily ever after. Notes on Generic Structure of Narrative Text Orientation: it means to introduce the participants or the characters of the story with the time and place set. Orientation actually exists in every text type though it has different term. In this story, the first paragraph is clearly seen to introduce the participants of the Cinderella Story. They were Cinderella her self as the main character of the story, her step mother which treated Cinderella badly, and her steps

sister which supported her mother to make Cinderella was treated very badly. Cinderella was introduced as a hero in this story. She struggled against the bad treatment from her step mother and sisters. Complication: it is such the crisis of the story. If there is not the crisis, the story is not a narrative text. In a long story, the complication appears in several situations. It means that some time there is more then one complication. In this Cinderella story, we can see clearly that there are Major Complication and Minor Complication. The second paragraph is the major complication of this Cinderella story. Cinderella got bad treatment from her stepmother. It is the bad crisis which drives into several minor complications which Cinderella has to overcome. Resolution: it is the final series of the events which happen in the story. The resolution can be good or bad. The point is that it has been accomplished by the characters. Like complication, there are Major Resolution and Minor Resolution. In the last paragraph, it is said that finally Cinderella lived happily. It is the happy resolution of the bad treatment. Read the other examples: Narrative

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