Birmingham J ail Daniel Cox, Amanda Hendrix, Devin Moore, Zelgai Saleh, Ben Tobin, Nathan Zelalem, Marcello Novella Paragraph 14 Evidence Perhaps it is easy for those who have never felt the stinging dark of segregation to say, Wait.
...when you are harried by day and haunted by night by the fact that you are a Negro...when you have no forever fighting desegregating sense of nobodiness then you will understand why we find it difficult to wait. Tone, Commentary, Metaphors, and Effect Using balanced view Qualification with perhaps Implying that he is about to propose a counter-argument
Comes back in a full circle from start Expresses anger and outrage through parallel structure (when you) Mentions harsh examples of what his people have had to go through to generate pathos Outraged tone Paragraph 15 Effects One has not only a legal but a moral responsibility to obey just laws, conversely, one has a moral responsibility to disobey unjust laws. Tone, Commentary, Metaphors and Effect Common sense Logos Conditional if/then statement Ethos States that people must obey just laws Draws back anger after burst in paragraph 14 Makes reference to Brown v. Board of Education to establish a connection
Paragraph 16 Evidence All segregation statutes are unjust because segregation distorts the soul and damages the personality A just law is a man-made code that squares with moral law or the law of God. An unjust law is a code that is out of harmony with moral law. It is morally wrong and awful Tone, Commentary, Metaphors and Effect Tone of anger o Anger b/c segregation/discrimination Comparison of just vs. unjust -> cites Gods authority as (explicit) evidence of the injustice of discrimination Audience: white congregation who partake in the widespread segregation Ethos -> used credible sources as support for his claim Paragraph 16 ...the law of God To put it in the terms of St. Thomas Aquinas to use the terminology of the Jewish philosopher Martin Buber I can urge men to obey the 1954 decision of the Supreme Court Citing God and saints gives religious support to his point o Citing a Jewish philosopher broadens range of influence o Religious fervor of the time made these authorities viable evidence for his claim Referencing a Supreme Court decision gave legal background to his claim o Intended for audience of officials in Washington to show their actions are unconstitutional Paragraph 17 Evidence An unjust law is a code that a numerical or power majority group compels a minority group to obey but does not make binding on itselfa just law is a code that a majority compels a minority to follow and that it is willing to follow itself. Tone, Commentary, Metaphors and Effect Comparison of just vs. unjust -> metaphor regarding govt is unjust through their difference in legal opinions Accusing tone o Accusing govt of being unjust/oppressive Implies unfairness through discrimination of all groups o Rights of man includes all groups, not just whites Discusses legality of this sameness and difference Paragraph 18 Evidence A law is unjust if inflicted on a minority that...had no part...devising the law. Can any law enacted under such circumstances [having zero negro voters registered] be considered democratically structured?
Tone, Commentary, Metaphors and Effect Dr. King has a very angry tone Basically challenges his audience, which is all of america: If the U.S.A. claims to be democratic, how does having a large part of the population not voting back that up? Asks two rhetorical questions-both about democracy and if anything can be considered democratic if it does not include the minority. Paragraph 19 Evidence Sometimes a law is just on its face and unjust in its application. [A law] becomes unjust when it...denies citizens the first amendment privilege of peaceful assembly and protest. Tone, Commentary, Metaphors and Effect Takes the supreme law of the land and shows how even that doesn't stop segregation. Points out the fine difference between two laws, needing a permit to parade and exercising First Amendment rights Word of law vs. Spirit of law vs. individual interpretation of law Comparisons for Unjust Laws St. Augustine says that "an unjust law is no law at all" (paragraph 15) An unjust law is a code that is out of harmony with morality, one that is not rooted in natural and eternal law (paragraph 16) An unjust law is a code that a majority compels a minority to obey but does not obey itself (paragraph 17) A law is unjust if it is inflicted on a minority that has no right to vote, enact, or devise that law (paragraph 18) Laws are unjust on application, such as using a law for the sole purpose of maintaining segregation (paragraph 19) Paragraph 20 In no sense do I advocate evading or defying the law, as would the rabid segregationist I submit that an individual who breaks a law that conscience tell him is unjust and who willingly accept the penalty of imprisonment in order to arouse the conscience of the community over its injustice, is in reality expressing the highest respect for law Martin Luther King starts paragraph in an apologetic tone. He also states that he isnt inciting rebellion or the defying of authorities. He justifies his actions, explaining why its the right thing to do. Paragraph 21 Of course there is nothing new with this kind of civil disobedience. It was evidenced in the refusal of Shadrach, Meshach and Abednego to obey the laws of Nebuchadnezzar, on the grounds that a higher moral law was at stake. Martin Luther King uses this paragraph as a recipient of examples for his previous paragraph. He gives a number of examples of historical characters and events where civil disobedience was key to achieving ones goals. The examples he provides are: the early christians, Socrates and the Boston Tea Party Mentioning the Boston Tea Party was an efficient tactic, because it relates to the American People. Paragraph 22
Paragraph 23 Paragraph 24 Paragraph 25 Evidence In your statement you assert that our actions, even though peaceful, must be condemned because they precipitate violence. Isn't this like condemning a robbed man because his possession of money precipitated the evil act of robbery? Isn't this like condemning Jesus because his unique god- consciousness and never-ceasing devotion to Gods will precipitated the evil act of crucifixion? Society must protect the robber and punish the robber.
Tone, Commentary, Metaphors and Effect MLK boldly justifies his peaceful protests using logic. He persuades the audience with examples of familiar events in which we would correct an injustice. His tone is inquisitorial as he waits for the audience to realize the answer. He makes allusions to major characters in history such as Jesus and Socrates. MLKs persuasive techniques demonstrate that we knew the right answer all along and, to continue to stand against him would also mean opposing logic itself.
Paragraph 26 Evidence Such an attitude is a tragic misconception of time. Actually, time itself is neutral I feel people that the people of ill will have used time much more effectively Time is always ripe to do right. Tone, Commentary, Metaphors and Effect MLK conveys a remorse for the opinion some of his allies hold. His interpretation for the concept of time demonstrates to the audience how such an opinion only encourages detrimental effects upon the movement. His tone and commentary transform into those which are inspiring, using phrases as time is always ripe to do right. He then motivates the audience to think logically, answer his questions for themselves, and then act upon his inspirations.