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WRITING:
UNITY & COHERENCE
OBJECTIVES
To revise paragraphs to increase
effectively.
UNITY
COHERENCE
A paragraph has coherence when its
UNITY achieved by
discussing only one idea in a
paragraph.
always staying on the topic in
ANSWER
I.
II.
III.
Paragraph 2
ANSWER
i) Teachers should take steps to prevent students
from cheating on exams.
ii) Teachers should take steps to prevent students
from cheating on exams.
iii) One of the problems with our school systems is
a lack of discipline
ANSWER
California is a state with every type of
geography.
ii. California is a state with every type of
geography.
iii. California also has Hollywood and
--Disneyland,which are world-famous
centres of entertainment.
--California is a popular place to live,so
many peolple move there every year.Indeed
i.
COHERENCE achieved by
1.Repeation of Key
Nouns
2. Use consistent
Pronouns
ANSWER
You should have circled the noun gold 7
times
The pronoun it twice
The pronoun its 4 times
Transition in Action
The next four slides contains a brief
essay that will take you on a
little journey. Transition markers
are provided but ideas are not.
Have fun!
In conclusion, while
the terror that lurks
around the
commonly accepted
ideas of ghosts
continues to terrify
people, the
mysterious nature of
ghosts keeps people
_____________.
In conclusion, while
the terror that lurks
around the
commonly accepted
ideas of ghosts
continues to terrify
people, the
mysterious nature of
ghosts keeps people
coming back for
more.