Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
Keeping it clear
The goal of business writing is to express not
impress
In order to maintain the clarity of the message,
sender needs to make sure that the message is 1)
simple and 2) conversational
One way to achieve clear writing is to use activevoice sentences that avoid foggy, indirect and
pompous language.
Keeping it clear
Foggy
Clear
To be sure of obtaining
optimal results, it is essential
that you give your employees
the implements that are
necessary for completion of
the job.
Keeping it conversational
To achieve a conversational tone, sound professional
Keeping it conversational
Formal
Conversational
Keeping it concise
Main points are easier to understand in concise
messages.
In order to keep message concise, writer should:
Remove opening fillers
Eliminate redundancies
Reduce compound prepositions
Purge empty words
Concise
Eliminating redundancies
Redundancies convey the same meaning more than
once.
Redundancies to avoid:
Advance
warning
Contributing
factor
New changes
Alter or change
Dollar amount
Grateful thanks
Past history
Assemble together
Great majority
Perfectly clear
Integral part
Personal opinion
Collect together
Exactly identical
Potential
opportunity
Consensus of
opinion
Few in number
Midway between
Proposed plan
Serious interest
Refer back
True facts
Shorter
WCP
Shorter
As to whether
Whether
For
At a latter date
Later
In advance of
Before
Now
Subsequent to
After
At such time
When
How
In accordance with
By
Until
although
because
Verb
Conduct a discussion of
Discuss
Create a reduction in
Reduce
Prepare
Give consideration to
Consider
Make an assumption of
Assume
Make a discovery of
Discover
Perform an analysis of
analyze
Conclude
Take action on
act
Improved version
As you request
At your request
Enclosed is
Well try
As you wish
In receipt of
Have received
please
Thank you
Separately
With reference to
about
Developing parallelism
Not parallel
Parallel
Examine application
Interview applicant
Check references
Measuring readability
Experts have developed methods for measuring how
Be conversational
Shun redundancies
10 Test readability