Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
Class Five
Taught by
Fazil Munir BA JD Esq
Todays Lesson
Body paragraphs (AKA supporting
paragraphs)
Body paragraphs
Goal: CONVINCE your reader that
your thesis is correct, using specific
facts, examples and personal
experience.
Body paragraphs ________ the thesis.
Support
Chronological Order
Thesis: Unfortunately, my senior prom was a disaster.
Topic sentence #1: I thought I had everything
arranged well in advance of the night of the prom.
Topic sentence #2: My date was forgiving enough
until we arrived fifteen minutes late at the four star
French restaurant where I had made reservations
months in advance.
Topic sentence #3: By the time we arrived at the
prom, my date was barely speaking to me.
What kind of an essay is this?
Narrative essay
Order of Importance
(tip: similar words)
Thesis: The daily newspaper provides a valuable source
of information. Not only does it report the news, but it
provides valuable background information that helps us
understand how our world works, and it connects us to
our community and culture.
Topic sentence #1: Reading the daily news makes
us better citizens by informing us about international,
national, and local news.
Topic sentence #2: Almost as important as the news is
the background information the newspaper supplies
in order to give the news an understandable context.
Topic sentence #3: Most importantly, the newspaper
offers us a vivid connection to our community.
Transitions/Bridge Between
paragraphs
Thesis: As I drove my son to school, I realized
how perfectly my new minivan meets my needs
as a parent.
Topic sentence #1: First, the exterior of the
van offers me style, safety, and convenience.
Topic sentence #2: Not only does the
exterior of the new minivan perfectly suit my
needs as a parent, but the interior is designed for
the drivers safety and comfort.
Topic sentence #3: Finally, the vans
performance features make it a pleasure to drive.
THINGS TO AVOID
Avoid topic sentences that dont support the
thesis.
Avoid topic sentences that are too broad or
too narrow to be developed in a paragraph.
Avoid body paragraphs that do not use
transitions between paragraphs.
Avoid body paragraphs that are not
presented in logical order (if possible).
For example, most important to least important
Example
Thesis statement: Pollution, waste and climate
change are threatening freshwater supplies.
Topic 1: Fresh water is being polluted by dirty
water from several sources.
Topic 2: People are wasting fresh water
Topic 3: Changes in global weather patterns have
affected supplies of fresh water.
Exercises
Form the missing topic sentence
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Answers
Paragraph 1
Farmers need the water more than the
people who live near the river.
Explains how the two groups use the water
Food is more important than recreation.
Paragraph 2
Farmers have more right to the water than
the rich people
Explains how they use the water (example)
The rich are supported by the farmers.
Facts/Details/Statistics
Over the past 40 years, since the existing parking structures
were first built, campus enrollment has almost doubled.
According our campus records, we have over 10,000 students;
however, we have only 5,000 parking spaces.
Personal Experience
A story of someone you know and describe the
process of how he got sick.
Statistics
50% of people who try these diets die/ get sick.
2. Corporal Punishment
_____ Corporal punishment aggravates antisocial
behavior.
_____ Finally, corporal punishment instills fear rather
than respect.
_____ Corporal punishment is counterproductive
because it aggravates antisocial behavior in the
student, breaks down communication between
teacher and student, and instills fear rather than
respect.
_____ In addition to aggravating antisocial behavior,
corporal punishment blocks the opportunity for
communication between teacher and student.
An Admirable Man
_____ Not only was my Dad honest, but he
was also the hardest-working man Ive ever
known.
_____ My father showed me the meaning of
honesty.
_____ By setting a good example for me,
my father showed me the meaning of
honesty, hard work, and generosity.
_____ My father was also an enormously
generous man.
Repetition in Teletubbies
_____ First, the characters themselves, Tinky Winky,
Dipsy, Laa-Laa, and Po, are four variations on a theme.
_____ Not only are the Teletubbies repetitions of one
another, but sequences of actions are repeated within
each show.
_____ The show is Teletubbies, a British show aimed
specifically at toddlers, and the repetition I noticed is
no accident. Teletubbies uses repetition in a number of
ways to appeal to toddlers and help them learn.
_____ Similarly, the repetition of sequences from
previous shows provides predictability, familiarity, and
pleasure.