SK TUN SYED AHMAD

SHAHABUDIN
UPSR MODULE 2016

English Paper 014

Section B(ii)
A Complilation of Model
Writing
&
Exercises Made Easy
For You !

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Graphic organiser
Section B( ii)
Format Writing

TB. Yr
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Model Writing :
Writing an email

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TB. Yr
4

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Exercise 1
Writing an Email

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TB. Yr
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Model Writing
Writing a notice

11

TB. Yr
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Exercise 2
Writing a notice

14

TB. Yr
4

Model Writing:
a message of
sympathy

15

TB. Yr
4

Exercise 3
Writing a message

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TB. Yr
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Model Writing
Writing an
invitation

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TB. Yr
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Exercise 4
Writing an
invitation

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TB. Yr
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Exercise 5

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TB Yr 4

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Model Writing
email

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Exercise 6 Writing
an email -holiday

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TB. Yr
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Model Writing
Writing a postcard

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TB. Yr
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Exercise 7
Writing a postcard

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TB. Yr
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Model Writing
Writing a notice

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TB. Yr
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Model Writing

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TB. Yr
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Exercise 8
Writing a letter

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TB. Yr
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Model Writing
Book Report

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TB. Yr
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Exercise 9 Book
Report

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TB. Yr
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Model Writing
Book Report

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Writing a letterKings Castle & how

to prepare for a race

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Model Writing
Formal Letter
Writing

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Exercise 12
Writing a book
report

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TB. Yr
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Exercise 13
Writing a book
report

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TB. Yr
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E-card

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TB. Yr
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Model Writing
Writing a message
-Giving Directions

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TB. Yr
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Exercise 14
Writing a message
- Giving Directions

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TB. Yr
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Model Writing
Writing an email

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TB. Yr
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TB. Yr
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-Ways to Earn Extra

Pocket Money

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Exercise 15
Writing an email
-Ways to Earn Extra
Pocket Money

Lets look into Format

Writing through your
Textbooks
messag
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Book
report

email

SECTION B ( ii )
Format Writing
Formal/
informa
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notice

Letter
postcar
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YEAR 4 TEXTBOOK

Writing an email
Year 4 Textbook : page 26
Question:
Nurul has received an email from her friend,
Jagjit.
Help her to reply the email .

Jagjit emails
to Nurul
From jagjitkaur@electonicmail.com
To : nurul@electronicmail.com
Subject : Badminton Practice
Hi Nurul ,
There will be a badminton practice next week. It
starts at 3.30p.m. and finishes at 5.30p.m.
It will be at the badminton court. You need to
bring your racquet. The school provides
shuttlecocks.
Mr Ramesh is our new coach . He will be training
us for three months . Would you be able tp come
for practice?
Do you have an extra racquet? I lost mine last
week. Can you lend me one of yours?
Thank you . Hope to see you soon.
Jagjit

Nurul replies to
Jagjit

From : nurul@electronicmail.com
To
: jagitkaur@electronicmail.com
Subject : Badminton Practice
Hi Jagjit,
Thank you for your email .It was kind of
you to give me the details of the badminton
practice .I appreciate it.
Sure, I am going for the badminton practice next
week . Mr Ramesh is a good coach. We can learn
a lot from him. I am sorry to hear about your
racquet. Yes , I have extra racquets that you can
borrow .I will bring them when I come for the
practice . I am looking forward to it .
See you next week .
Nurul

Exercise 1 : Question : Complete the email

From : nurul@electronicmail.com
To
: jagitkaur@electronicmail.com
Subject : Badminton Practice
Hi Jagjit,
Thank you for your ________________ .It
was ___________ of you to give me the details of
the ____________________. I appreciate it . Sure , I
am
going
for
the
badminton
practice
___________________. Mr Ramesh is a _____________
coach. We can learn a lot from him. I am
____________to hear about your racquet. Yes , I
have extra racquets that you can ________________
.I will bring them when I come for the practice . I
am _________________ forward to it .
_________________________.
Nurul

Writing a notice
Year 4 Textbook : page 68

NOTICE
18 August
Away on A Holiday
This is to inform all friends and visitors to Our
Garden that I shall be away on a holiday starting
tomorrow. I shall be back on 25th August. My
cousin , Jelini will take over my garden duties
while I am away. Take care everyone . See you
soon!
Kinah
( Owner of Our Garden )

Question: Write a notice , using the information

below.
*School Garden Advisor
*Need more helpers in our garden
*Those who are interested , please contact Mr
Ramesh
* 27 August 2016

NOTICE
27August
Need Helpers
Our School Garden is under
expansion and we are in need of
helpers to help in the nursery ,
planting and weeding . Those who
are interested ,please contact me.
Come and lend a hand.
Mr Ramesh
School Garden Advisor

Exercise 2 : Fill in the blanks

NOTICE
27August
________________________
Our School Garden is under expansion
and we are in
__________________________to help in the
nursery , planting and _______________ .
Those who are interested ,please contact
me. Come and lend a hand.
__________________
School Garden Advisor

Year 4 Textbook , page 79

Question: Write a message of sympathy to a
friend
Dear Fariz,
I am shocked and sorry to hear about the
loss of your father, I can understand how you are
feeling now, However, you have to be strong and
do take care of yourself.
Your friend ,
Arif

Year 4 Textbook , page 79

Exercise 3 :Fill in the blanks
Dear ________________,
I am shocked and ______________ to hear
about the loss of your____________________, I can
understand how you are feeling now, However,
you have to be ____________________ and do take
________________ of yourself.
Your friend ,
__________________

Textbook Year 4 , Page 95

Question: Write an invitation to your friend for
an open house during the Gawai Festival .

Hello , my dear friends . I am having an open

house for Gawai festival and I would love to invite
you. Here are the details.
Date
Time
Place

: 1 June 2016
: 2.30 p.m.
: 38, Jalan Budaya , 93330 Kuching.

Hope to see you there.

Lydia

Textbook Year 4 , Page 95

Question: Write an invitation to your friend for
an open house during the Gawai Festival .

Exercise 4
Hello , my dear friends . I am __________ an open
house for ____________ festival and I _________ love
to ______________you. Here are the details.

Date

: __________________

Time

: __________________

Place

: ________________, 93330 Kuching.

_________to see ___________ there.

Lydia

Question: Write an invitation to your friend for

an open house during the Hari Raya.

Exercise 5
Hello , my dear friends . I am __________ an open
house for ________________________and I
___________ love to ______________you. Here are
the details.

Date

: __________________

Time

: __________________

Place

: __________________________________.

_________to see ___________ there.

Lydia

Writing an email
Textbook : page 150
From
:Jagjit@electronicmail.com
To
: mom@xyz.com
Subject : Mount Fuji Holiday
Dear Mother,
How are you ? I have just returned from
visiting Mount Fuji. I am amazed by its natural
wonders. Mount Fuji is surrounded by five lakes .
It is one of the most popular sites here because it
has a national park.I was told that the best
season to climb the mountain is from July to
August. I was surprised climbers hike the peak
every day.Maybe , we can climb the mountain
together one day,too.
I cant wait to go home. I miss Malaysia so much.
Love,
Jagjit

Exercise 6: Complete the exercise

From :Jagjit
To : mom@xyz.com
Subject : Mount Fuji Holiday
Dear Mother,
How are you ? I have just returned
from visiting Mount Fuji. I am
________________by its natural wonders.
Mount Fuji is ______________by five lakes . It is
one of the most popular sites here because it
has a ___________________.I was told that the
best ________________ to climb the mountain
is from July to August. I was surprised
climbers _____________ the peak every day
.Maybe , we can climb the mountain together
one day, too.
I cant wait to go home. I miss Malaysia so
much.
Love,
Jagjit

YEAR 5 TEXTBOOK

Writing a postcard
Year 5 Textbook : page 6
Jasleen sent a postcard to May Lee telling about
her holidays in Penang
Hi May Lee,
I am so excited !
Guess what! My family and I
are now in Penang Island. We
just went up the Penang Hill
on a funicular railway. It was
my first experience. From the
top of the hill, one can have
a birds eye view of The
Penang Bridge, the Komtar
building , and the famous
ferries. The view was truly
breathtaking.
Wish you were here.
Bye for now.
Sincerely,
Jasleen

Tan May lee

36, Jalan
Damai,
Taman Damai,
26400 Bandar
Pusat Jengka,
Pahang.

Exercise 7 :Imagine you are Jasleen .Write a

postcard to May Lee , telling her about your
holiday in Penang.

Hi __________________,
I am so ________________ !
Guess what! My family and I
are now in
_______________________. We
just went up the Penang Hill
on a funicular railway. It was
_____________________________
experience. From the top of
the hill, one can have
__________________
view of
The Penang Bridge, the
_____________ building , and
the famous ferries. The view
was truly
____________________________.
Wish you were here.
Bye for now.
Sincerely,
Jasleen

Tan May Lee,

36, Jalan
Damai,
Taman Damai,
26400 Bandar
Pusat Jengka,
Pahang.

Writing a notice
Year 5 Textbook : page 56

SEKOLAH KEBANGSAAN SERI DAMAI

NOTICE
Date : 15 May 2016
Child Safety and Protection Carnival
Sekolah Kebangsaan Seri Damai is
organising a carnival on child safety and
protection.
Date
: 25 May 2016
Time
:9.00a.m. - 2.00p.m.
Venue : School Hall
Many interesting activities will be held .
There will be
*A talk on staying safe
*A poster competition
*Self-defence demonstrations, and
*Parenting advice
Lets make our school and community safe
Miss Sharmila
Carnival Coordinator

Year 5 textbook : page 66

A letter from John to his friend

Dear Ashton,

812, Artistic
Road,
46600, Artistic
Land
23 July 2016

How are you ? I hope you are doing

well. I had an amazing experience visiting
the Kings castle today.The castle was huge
and beautiful .I never knew it had many
areas and rooms.
The first time I stepped foot into the
castle, I was amazed by the courtyard. It
was well-maintained with big colourful
flowers and beautiful flowers ad beautiful
plants. The trees were green and birds were
chirping . I could spend hours painting
there.
My favourite area in the castle was
the Art Gallery. A you know , the King is an
avid art collector. He collects paintings from
all over the world.Most of the paintings
were painted by famous artists. Im sure
they are worth a lot.
Thats all from me. Do write to me
about your interesting experience over the
weekend.
Yours sincerely,

Year 5 Textbook: page 138

Your friend is going to join a BMX race oganised by the
Adventure Sports Centre. Write a letter to advise him or
her on how to prepare for the race .
2615, Jalan
BP14/1,
Taman Muhibbah,
47100 Puchong,
Selangor.
Hi Jason ,
How are you? I hope you are fine . I
heard that you are going to participate in the
BMX race organised by the Adventure Centre. It
is good that you have the courage to join an
adventure sport that you like.
Since the race is just around the corner,
I would like to advise you to be physically
prepared. You must start training from now.
Before you start , you must always do warm up
exercises to prepare your body for the training.
Make sure you wear protective gear to prevent
any injury while doing the activity.
If you are tired, take a break before you
continue with the training. Make sure you drink
enough water to prevent dehydration. Most
importantly, you must always eat healthily and
train to make sure you remain fit and healthy.
I wish you good luck and stay calm for
the race. I know you can do it !
Regards,
Mike

Year 5 Textbook: page 138

Exercise 8
Your friend is going to join a BMX race oganised by the
Adventure Sports Centre. Write a letter to advise him or
her on how to prepare for the race . Fill in the blanks
with suitable words.
2615, Jalan
BP14/1,
Taman Muhibbah,
47100 Puchong,
Selangor.
Hi Jason ,
How are you? I hope
______________________. I heard that you are
going to ____________________in the BMX race
organised by the Adventure Centre. It is good
that you have the courage to join an adventure
sport that you like.
Since the race is just around the corner,
I would like to advise you to be physically
prepared. You must start training from now.
Before you start , you must always do
___________________________________to prepare
your body for the training. Make sure you wear
_______________________________ to prevent any
injury while doing the activity.
If you are tired, take a break before you
continue with the training. Make sure you drink
________________ _____________________to prevent
dehydration. Most importantly, you must always
eat healthily and train to make sure you remain
_________________________________ .
I wish you good luck and stay calm for
the race. I know you can do it !
Regards,
Mike

YEAR 6 TEXTBOOK

Writing a book report

Year 6 Textbook :page7
Idith completes a book report

Title : Little House on the Prairie

Author: Laura Ingalls Wilder
Genre: Classic
Characters:
Laura, father, mother, Mary, and Baby Carrie
Synopsis:
The story is about a family that moves to a new
town. They work hard to make this new place
their home. There they learn about survival skills
and the importance of family values
Opinion of the book:
I like this book because it is exciting and
interesting Laura experiences a lot of adventures
in her new home.
Moral values/ knowledge gained:
I learnt the importance of family values, honesty ,
and hardwork.

Exercise 9 : Complete the book report on

Little House on the Prairie

Title : Little House on the Prairie

Author: __________________________
Genre: __________________________
Characters:
Laura, father, mother, Mary, and Baby Carrie
Synopsis:
The story is about ______________that moves to a
new town. They work hard to make this new place
_______________________. There they learn about
survival skills and the importance of
_________________________.
Opinion of the book:
I like this book
because______________________________
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________
.
Moral values/ knowledge gained:
I learnt __________________________________________
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________

Writing a book report

Year 6 Textbook :page7
Idith completes a book report

Title : Jaws
Author: Peter Benchley
Genre: Science Fiction
Characters:
Brody ( a police officer), Quint ( a shark hunter)
and Hooper ( a marine biologist)
Synopsis:
The story is about a great white shark that
attacks a small resort town and the journey of
three men to kill it.
Opinion of the book:
I do not like the book because it is frightening
and scary. Many people who went swimming were
attacked and killed by the big white shark.
Moral values/ knowledge gained:
I learnt that we must take care of ourselves and
be courageous

Writing a book report

Year 6 Textbook :page7
Exercise 10 :Complete the book report on
Jaws

Title : Jaws
Author: ________________________
Genre: _________________________
Characters:
Brody ( a police officer), Quint ( a shark hunter)
and Hooper ( a marine biologist)
Synopsis:
The story is about a great
________________________that attacks a small resort
town and the journey of three men to
__________________ .
Opinion of the book:
I do not like the book because it is
____________________ _______________________ .Many
people who went ___________________ were
attacked and killed by the big white shark.
Moral values/ knowledge gained:
I learnt that we must ____________________of
ourselves and be courageous.

Exercise 11 :Read the details of Gullivers Travels

and write a report on it
Travels into Several
Remote Nations of the
World. In Four Parts. By
Lemuel Gulliver, First a
Surgeon, and then a
Captain of Several Ships,
commonly known as
Gulliver's Travels
Originally published:
October 28, 1726
Author: Jonathan Swift
Genres: Satire, Fantasy
Characters: The emperor of
Liliput
The farmer , Glumdalclitch,
The king of Brobdingnag ,
others
Moral : Respect , loyalty ,
honours his promises

Zikry
: Hi Naim !
Naim
: What are you reading ?
Zikry
: Its Gullivers Travels . It is a fascinating
story about the
adventures of Gulliver.
Naim
: Who is Gulliver ?
Zikry
: Lemuel Gulliver is the main character of this
story . He
was a surgeon who then became a
captain of several
ships.He went on a few
interesting voyages all over the
world. He was brave
, brilliant and courageous . The story
is full of
fantasy and excitement ,I think you should read it
Naim
: It sounds interesting ! Please lend the book
to me after
you have finished reading it .
Zikry
: Sure.

Exercise 11 :Now , write a book report .

Title : Gullivers Travels
Author: _________________________________
Genre: __________________________________
Characters:
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________
Synopsis:
The story is about
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________
Moral values/ knowledge gained:
I learnt
__________________________________________________
_________________________________________________.

Formal Letter Writing

Year 6 Textbook: page 88
Najmee was absent from school . His father wrote
a letter to Encik Hakimi
Naim bin Ahmad,
17 ,Taman Bukit Segar,
56100 Cheras
Kuala Lumpur,
8 June 2016
Encik Hakimi bin Razman ,
6 Robotics,
Sekolah Kebangsaan Tunas Cipta.
Dear Encik Hakimi,
Permission to be Absent from Cocurricular Activities
I am writing to inform you that my son,
Najmee bin Naim , will not be able to attend
the co curricular activities on Wednesday ,
20th June. Najmee will be attending his
brothers graduation in Penang.
I hope you will excuse him.
Yours sincerely,
Naim
..
Naim bin Ahmad

Formal Letter-Writing
Year 6 Textbook: page 88
Exercise 12:Najmee was absent from school . His
father wrote a letter to Encik Hakimi
Naim bin Ahmad
____________________
____________________
____________________
8 June 2016.
Encik Hakimi bin Razman ,
6 Robotics,
Sekolah Kebangsaan Tunas Cipta.
Dear Encik Hakimi,
Permission to be Absent from Cocurricular Activities
I am writing to _____________________that my
son, Najmee bin Naim , will not be able
________________ the co-curricular activities on
_____________________.
______________________________________________
_____________________________________________.
I hope you will excuse him.
Yours sincerely,
Naim
..
Naim bin Ahmad

Exercise 13 :Write a letter to your teacher

seeking permission to be absent from school for
two days
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Year 6 Textbook , page17

Encik Hakimi and the pupils of 6 Robotics visited the home for
the elderly.Thye cleaned the home , ate with the old folks, and
entertained them with games, songs and performances. The
people at the home were very happy.They sent an e-card their
gratitude to the people at the home .

Dear Uncles and Aunts,

We would like to thank you for

having us at the home yesterday. It was a
great pleasure to meet all of you. We
were very pleased as we were given a
warm welcome.
We had a lot of fun playing games
and ssinging songs.We also enjoyed
listening to your stories.
We hope you enjoyed yourselves
as much as we did . We cannot wait to
meet all of you again.

Year 6 Textbook page :125

Look at the map . Write a message to Encik
Hakimi on how to get to the swimming pool
from the entrance of the Paralympic
Village .

Hi Encik Hakimi,
Congratulations for being chosen as one
of the athletes In the Paralympic Games , this
year . Here is the way to the swimming pool .
When you reach the entrance of the Paralympic
Village , go straight on until you come to a
roundabout.At the roundabout, take the third
turning into Jalan Ria. Go along the road the road
until you see a basketball court on your right .The
swimming pool is next to the basketball court .
All the best!
Luqman

Year 6 Textbook page :125

Exercise 14 : Look at the map . Write a
message to Encik Hakimi on how to get to
the swimming pool from the entrance of the
Paralympic Village .

Hi _______________________,
Congratulations for being chosen as one
of the athletes In the Paralympic Games , this
year . Here is the way to the swimming pool .
When you reach the entrance of the Paralympic
Village , _______________________ on until you
come to a ____________________.At the roundabout,
take the_________________turning into Jalan Ria. Go
along the road the road until you see a basketball
court
______________________________ .The
swimming pool is next to the
___________________________.
All the best !
Luqman

Year 6 Textbook , page 139

Writing an email
From
: idithi@genz.com
To
: kamini@genz.com
Subject : My Pocket Money
Dear Kamini,
Hi! How is your holiday going on ? I saw a
beautiful bag at the newly opened supermarket in
town. I wanted to buy it but I don not have
enough money.
I would really appreciate if you could
suggest ways to earn some pocket money.
Bye
Idith

Year 6 Textbook , page 139

Exercise 15 : Fill in the blanks with suitable
and relevant information on ways to earn
extra pocket money
From
: ___________________________
To
: ___________________________
Subject : My Pocket Money
Dear _________________,
Hi! How is _________________________going
on ? I saw a _________________________ bag at the
newly opened supermarket in town. I wanted to
buy it but I do not have __________________ money.
I would really appreciate if you could
suggest ways to earn some
________________________________.
Bye.
_____________________

This module was initiated by the English Panel of

SK Tun Syed Ahmad Shahabudin , Melaka. We
would like to acknowledge that most materials
were taken from the Year 4 , 5 and 6 Textbooks.
The exercises are meant to be used as revision
for the coming UPSR 2016 exam .Please take
note that this module is not meant for
commercial use.

Linda De Costa
Madam Linda De Costa
English Panel Head 2016
9 July 2016