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One word
A phrase or part of a sentence
A sentence
A group of sentences
Use a Quotation:
o to emphasize a point you've made
o to provide an example
o to show an author's intention
o to show how historical figures spoke or
thought
o to preserve vivid or technical language
MAKING A
QUOTE
SANDWICH
How do you
make a
sandwich?
explanatio
n
lead-in
Introductio
n
quotation
Comments
Adds
Compares
Admits
Agrees
Argues
Confirms
Declares
Asserts
Denies
Believes
Disputes
Claims
Emphasizes
Refutes
Grants
Rejects
Illustrates
Implies
Insists
Reports
Responds
Notes
Suggests
Observes
Thinks
Points out
Writes
THREE STEP
QUOTATION
STRATEGY
SECOND SLICE OF
BREAD:
Another of James interesting positions is his argument
that a non-military conscription can improve our society
by improving the character of the young people who
serve in it. He claims that we should get toughness
without callousness, authority with as little criminal
cruelty as possible, and painful work done cheerily
because the duty is temporary, and threatens not, as
now, to degrade the whole remainder of one's life(21). I
agree with James that requiring everyone to serve
in a non-military army could cause these positive
characteristics to become much more
commonplace in our country, which in turn would
Short Quotations:
use quotation marks
make sentences smoothly flow from your words to
those quoted, as in these examples that follow MLA
format:
Example
According to Princeton Writing Centre (2009,
para. 7), direct quotes should only be used
provide support for academic argument for a
"compelling" (one word) reason and the choice
to quote may be because "you want your
readers to be able to see, in full, what
someone else has said" (16 words) before you
go on to analyze the statement.
Example
Students often misunderstand the role of quotations in writing
and overdo the strategy:
Students include four quotations where one would do. This
can give the impression that you don't have enough to say
and are using quotations to take up space [a common
strategy for some students]. Also, the excessive use of quotes
... may be taken to indicate that you don't understand the
position well enough to explain it in your own words.
(Dartmouth, 2008, para. 11) (62 words)
Moreover, there are a number of technical rules that students
need to learn to use quotations correctly in their writing.
Correct convention
Use an ellipsis signal (three
dots ... ). Leave a space either
side of the 3 dots
Use square brackets [ ]
around the letter
Use square brackets [ ]
around the added words
Example
"Rome had several 'mad emperors.' [Nero]
was the maddest of them all" (Smith 32).
ORIGINAL - "He was the maddest of them all,
Quotations within quotations - we change from
double to single quotation marks ('mad
emperors)
Proofread:
Check for content:
Are all the parts of the quote sandwich there?
Is your analysis thoughtful and insightful?
EVALUATION OF EFFECTIVE
QUOTING
Rate your partners use of quoted evidence on a scale of 1- 5
according to the following criteria.
Does the author establish solid context and introduction for the
quote? (i.e. does the author incorporate the quote well enough to
make sure it does not seem dropped from nowhere?
Does the paper smoothly transition between the two voices (the
voice of the author of the paper and the voice of the quoted
author)?
Do you understand why he or she chose the quote? Does the writer
take the time to explain the relation between the quote and his or
her own argument or does the reader have to figure out how the
quote is related?
EVALUATION OF EFFECTIVE
QUOTING
Do you feel satisfied with the level of analysis AFTER the quote?
Is there as much analysis as there is quoting? Or, is the quote
followed up with a mere like she said remark? The paper writer should be doing as much analytic work as the quoted
author?
Is each quote connected directly to either the point of the
paragraph (check topic sentence) or the thesis of the paper?