Digital Graphic

Narrative
Development
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Shape Task

Shape Task

Evaluation
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image?

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it again?

Rotoscope

Evaluation
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image?

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Film Quotes

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Text Based

Text Based

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Comic Book

Evaluation
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Photo Story

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Illustration

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arrative Environment

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Initial Ideas

Idea Generation
Pike & The Ring
Location: North Yorkshire (Pickering)
Characters: King, Thief
Source: goo.gl/jcBbFn
The Nightingale
Location: Inside a House
Characters: Rich Man and a Nightingale
Source:goo.gl/encQCG

Proposal
Dimensions
Pages: 8, Page Size 13.3 x 18.1
Export Format
PDF
Advantages: PDF files require very little storage therefore can be
upload to the internet easily.
Disadvantages: PDF files aren't editable once exported.
Story Overview
The Pike and the Ring is story about a King who is fishing and whilst
he is fishing his ring has fallen off and landed in the beck and when
the Ring is falling down the river by a pike but the King whom is
oblivious to the fact that he has lost his ring continues fishing and
then goes back to his palace. When the king returns to his palace he
discovers that his ring is missing and accuses on of the servants of
stealing it however years later that same pike is caught by for the
king for his dinner and as the pike is displayed in front of him on the
dinning table he cuts open the pike only to find his ring. As the king
accused the servant of stealing the ring he decides to marry the

Production Methods
To create my children's book I will be using rotoscoping as this
allows me to create simple characters and objects, as well as
rotoscoping, I will also be using some shapes in order to create the
landscape for the background as due to my story being very rural
this is important to the reader in order to make the reader have a
more immersive experience.

Audience
My audience will be women with children as they are most likely to
purchase the book for their child, acording to my research. The
research also shows that the upper class is more likely to purchase
a childrens book compared to a middle class person. The book also
needs to be targeted at children so do this my book will be simple
but sleek in order to meet the needs of my audience. The audience
has a range of interests such as drama, dancing, Television and
many others.
Deadline
18th November 2016

What are the strengths of the proposal?

What areas of the proposal need further work?

Detailed. The story overview is detailed and

clear to understand which gives an easy idea of
what is to be expected.
You have a very clear idea of what the book is
going to look like which will act as a strength
when moving forward within the project.

When talking about audience, talk more about

the age of the children and what you are going
to include in the book (colours, amount of text,
pictures etc.) that is going to be beneficial for
the children and how they will interpret it.

What are the strengths of the idea generation?

What areas of idea generation could have been

further developed?

With your chosen idea you have created a

detailed and successful mind map organising
each section of the film such as characters,
scenes and locations which makes it easy for
others who are unknown of your story to
interpret everything and create an image of
what it will look like in their mind.

Need more photos in mood board. Two mood

boards, one for character and one for setting.
Expand idea generation to show you have
thought about different possible ideas for your
book.

What are the strengths of the proposal?

What areas of the proposal need further work?

There is a clear understanding of the storyline

because it is well described and thought out. A
strong description of why they have chosen that
audience, this helps to create the book for that
specific demographic. There is a clear description
of their production methods and why they have
chosen to do that specific method.

Needs more work on the actual characteristics of

the audience. Include descriptions of their class,
ethnicity and locations. Possibly explain how the
production techniques will link to the interests of
children and how it will appeal to them.

What are the strengths of the idea generation?

What areas of idea generation could have been

further developed?

Really detailed mind map with good explanations

and descriptions. Ideas presented clearly and gives
a clear indication of the overall
appearance/storyline of the book.

Add images to the mind map to really put forth your

ideas. For example you could include images of
your colour palette, characters, and some small
illustrations of your descriptions. The mood board
needs more work, add more images and present
them in a more creative way. You could add text
examples and colour palettes to add more depth to
the mood board. This will also help presented
ideas in a more detailed way. Add more description
to idea generation, i.e. plot summary or book
covers.

What are the strengths of the proposal?

What areas of the proposal need further work?

The proposal is detailed and clear to understand.

You have explained about your target audience
well. You have spoke about good methods of
production making in great detail.

Talk about other tools and methods you may be

using in the making of your book. To improve your
audience box you could add more information like
the age range of the audience and their interests.

What are the strengths of the idea generation?

What areas of idea generation could have been

further developed?

you have noted the key point of the stories you

have researched so far in you idea generation. You
have included a lot of important detail in the mind
map.

To improve your idea generation you could

research more stories to give you a wider range of
choices to choose from. For the mood board you
can add more pictures and colour charts to show
what colour scheme youre going for, bold colour
scheme or a dull colour scheme. You could also
add font examples to show you ideas of what you
want the font to be.

Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
The feedback I received was good as it showed clearly what I needed
to improve on and because of this I can now add more information to
parts which my peers believed needed improving. In my proposal my
story outline was praised because they believe that it was very
detailed.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
I agreed with the feedback that suggested that I needed to add more
detail to my mood board and because of this I will add more slides
regarding the characters appearance the location and the style of the
book. The parts I also agreed with was that they thought my story
outline was good and I agree as I believe it cover the main story well in
high detail.
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?
The parts of the feedback I disagreed with was that I needed to
describe my idea generation process better although I thought that it
was good by just listing potential stories I was going to use.

Original Script
The origins of Pickering are rather colourfully recounted in an old
myth, which tells us that it was established by a king named Peredurus
around 270 BC. According to the legend, Peredurus lost his ring. He
accused a young woman of stealing it, though in fact it had fallen into
the River Costa, where it was swallowed by a pike. By chance the pike
was caught that same day and cooked for the king's dinner. When the
ring was found, the king married the young woman.
http://www.britainexpress.com/attractions.htm?attraction=2769

Original Script
Original Script goes here with link to where it came from

Story Breakdown
1. The King goes fishing.
2. The King loses his ring in the beck.
3. A Pike eats up the ring
4. The King returns to the Palace
5. The King discovers that his ring has gone
6. The same Pike is caught later for his dinner
7. The King accuses a servant of stealing the Ring
8. The Pike is put on the table for dinner
9. The King cuts the Pike open and discovers the Ring
10. The King apologies to the servant and marries her.

Draft Script
PAGE 1: There once was a king who lived in a big house. The King loved to fish and one day he decide
to go fishing.
PAGE 2: The king was fishing but then s
suddenly his ring slipped off and landed in the river. The king didn'tt realise that his ring had fallen off
and he carried on fishing.
PAGE 3: The Kings ring was sinking to the bottom of the river but there was a big pike which was
swimming nearby. The Pike thought the
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Final Script
Final script goes here.

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