THE WAY TO REVIEW A PAPER

& MAKE A GOOD PAPER

Ahmad Syauqi 3714100042

Lutfi Zakaria 3714100045
 CONTENT
1. Goals of making paper and review it

2. How to Review :analyze the structure &

component

3. Practice : Result of the review

 GOALS OF MAKING PAPER
AND REVIEW IT
Why make a Paper? Why reviewing it?

1. Validity from our research 1. Knowing the plus and minus of the literature

2. Share ideas, experiments and result precisely to people 2. Scoring the Paper

3. A coherent information and explanation to people 3. Help us to know the pattern to make a paper!
HOW TO REVIEW :ANALYZE THE
STRUCTURE & COMPONENT
 TITLE

method

objective

object
identity
method SHORTFALL

Introduction
Result and Discussion
conclusion
Backgroun
d

Complete

Objective

Basic
Theory
Flow Chart !
Wrong Place!

Complete

output
outcome
Analisa
Acknowledge
the objection

Complete

Proof of data
Appropriate
THE REVIEW RESULT:

ANALISIS ANOMALI
GAYABERAT ANTAR WAKTU
UNTUK PEMANTAUAN
AMBLESAN TANAH DI KOTA
SEMARANG
Ahmad Syauqi
Lutfi Zakaria
PROBLEM

SOLUTION

MAPPING THE SUBSIDENCE AREA WITH GRAVITY METHOD

GRAVITY?

output

outcome

(oktonavirlna & Pudja, 2009)

 Plotting the spot of measurement Plotting the spot of measurement

Data Acquisition Data Acquisition

tools tools data retrieval requirements

data retrieval requirements

Data
Processing
Data
Processing
METODE
Software Surfer 10 Software Surfer 10
Coherent line
Mapping the Mays Gravity Contour map
Mapping the Octobers Gravity Contour
map

Tidal Correction Coordination line

Drift Correction

Rainfall Correction

Processing on Software Surfer 10

Result : Map of Time Gravity anomalies

Determining the subsidence

area
PLOTTING THE
OBSERVATION POINT AND
ACQUISITION DATA Tools
Gravimeter Scintrex Autograv
CG-5
Global Positioning System (GPS),
Garmin
Map Semarang
Digital Camera
Notebook

Acquisition data requirement

The location of the point should be clear
The point location should be stable
The point location can receive signals

Picture 1 :The distribution of observation point

 RESULT
Gravity Contour Map on
Gravity Contour Map on May
October

Max : 978119.508 mGal , min 978098.542 mGal Max : 978119.520 mGal , min 978098.542 mGal
 High Anomaly: Subsidence!

FINAL
RESULT
MAP OF TIME GRAVITY
ANOMALIES
Low Anomaly: groundwater reduction, high potential to subside. Presumed Subsidence : 0.1 to
(high risk) 0.875 mGal.
Areas : Molitex, Kantor ESDM,
B345, Puri Tar, Agility, Gereja
Boysa, Gudang Altex (Jl. Arteri),
SPBE Arteri, Kejari (Pelabuhan),
Kampung Laut, Marina, Komijen,
109, Kaligawe

Reducing Groundwater : -0.1 to

-0.480 mGal
Areas : SMA 14, Tambak Mas, Pos
Polisi, Indraprasta, Masjid,
Dadapsari, Pasar Boom Lama
THANK YOU