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Journal Identity
Glaucoma
optic neuropathy characterized by progressive degeneration of retinal
ganglion cells (RGCs) and their axons, resulting in changes in the
appearance of the optic disc and visual field loss
This Research
determine the relationship between glucose levels variation and IOP
fluctuation in diabetic and nondiabetic patients.
Methods
37 patients
31%
69%
17 nondiabetic 20 diabetic
1
baseline measurements 2 postprandial
glucose (fasting for measurements glucose
exactly 8 hours, i.e., after (exactly 2 hours after the
overnight fasting) meal, i.e., after lunch time)
Statistical Analysis
Title and Abstract a. Describes objectives, a. Yes, the abstracts of the journal have clerly defined
methods, research results and objectives, methods, and research results and conclusions.
conclusions b. The information presented in the abstract is clear and
b. Provide an informative and complete summary and in accordance with the results
balanced summary of what is obtained in the study.
done and what is found
Background Explain the scientific and rational Yes, on the background explain why this research needs to be done
background why research needs to because some systemic factors can affect intraocular pressure
be done (IOP), one of them is diabetic. It is not yet known whether
variations in glucose levels can cause changes in IOP in
individuals with diabetes and nondiabetes.
Aim Determine the specific aim, Yes, this journal suggests that the aim of the study was to evaluate
including the proposed hypothesis the relationship between glucose levels and increased intraocular
pressure (IOP) in diabetic and nondiabetic patients.
Population Describe how the population is No, this study does not explain the population used in the study.
determined
Topic Information Explanation
Research subject Criteria of research subjects The study explains the subjects used are patients who come
to undergo complete ophthalmological examination
(including IOP examination), with clear explanation about
exclusion criteria. In addition, the journal also explains how
to determine the population of diabetes and nondiabetes.
Sample Size Explain the minimum sample No, this journal does not mention clerly the criteria for
determination criteria needed to determining the sample size, the sampling method.
generate research strength as
well as sampling technique.
Research procedure Describes in detail and Yes, the research described research procedures that start
systematic research procedures from the determination of subjects, variables and data
(data collection techniques) analysis.
Research design Explain the research design No, this study does not clerly explain the research design
undertaken.
Topic Information Explanation
Data analysis techniques Data analysis techniques used to compare Yes, in this research the data obtained are done by some data analysis ie
the results of research paired t-test, nonparametric test for the variable which is not normal
distribution, and regression analysis.
Research time Explain the time of the research No, this study does not explain the timing of the research conducted.
Outcome research For outcome of research result The results of the research are described descriptively and in the form of
tables and curves.
Interpretation Interpretation of the results Interpretation of results in this study was also compared with previous studies
that have related topics.
Generalizability What results can be generalized in the The results of this study can be generalized in the community although it still
community needs further research to improve the research limitations.
Overall evidence General interpretation of results in the This research has been good enough to describe the results descriptively,
context of research tables and curves. This study also compares with other research results that
have relevance to the topic. This study can also show a significant
relationship between blood glucose levels and IOP values, especially in
diabetic patients.
Strength
1. The title of the journal is interesting enough to make the reader interested to
read the journal.
2. The title and abstract provide a clear and informative description of the
research for the reader.
3. The background and objectives of the study are clerly defined for the reader.
4. Journal explain clear research procedures.
5. This journal provides information about the relationship between glucose levels
with the value of IOP so that it can add knowledge to pay more attention to
patients who come to do eye examination with history of diabetic.
6. In the journal is presented advantages and disadvantages of research, so that it
can be used as a reference in further research.
Weakness
1. This journal does not mention how to determine the sampling and sampling
method.
2. This journal explains the presence of confounding factors such as age,
heredity, and gender in their influence on IOP, but is not explained more in the
discussion.
3. In the results of the study also show the correlation between the variation of
IOP in the right eye and the variation of IOP in the left eye, but not described
more detail in the discussion.
4. More sample is required so that it adds more discussion.
5. Some of the sources used in the study have a published year which is
considered less up-to-date, i.e. under the year 2000.
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