Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
Writing
for Effect
Learning Objectives
Upon completion this chapter, you will be able to;
Write business communication with emphasizing key points.
Have positive effect on human relations.
By;
Explaining the need for effect in writing business messages.
Using a conversational style.
Using the you-viewpoint to build goodwill.
Employing positive language for achieving goodwill
Explaining the techniques for achieving courtesy.
Writing documents that flow smoothly
Affecting Human Relation through
Writing
Dear Mr. Morley:
Sincerely yours,
Analysis of The Message
In this message you detect more than just the
readability problem.
The words are not polite. Instead of showing
concern for the reader, they are blunt, tactless, and
unfriendly.
Overall, they leave a bad impression in the reader’s
mind --- the impression of a writer, and a business,
unconcerned about the needs for good human
relations.
The Importance of Effect
Written communication within a business primarily
requires clarity.
Good business writing, especially to external
audiences, require both clarity and the goodwill
effect.
Most people enjoy building goodwill.
Writing in conversational language has a favorable
effect.
Conversational Style
One technique that helps build the goodwill effect is
to write in conversational language.
By conversational language we mean language that
resembles conversation.
It is warm and natural.
Such language leaves an impression that people like.
It is also the language we use most and understand
best.
Because it is easily understood, it is good business
etiquette to use it.
Resisting the Tendency to Be Formal
Writing in conversational language is not easy, for
we tend to be stiff and formal.
We seek the big word, the difficult word. The result
is cold and unnatural style --- one that doesn’t
produce the goodwill effect you want your
messages to have.
The following examples illustrate this problem and
how to correct it.
Examples
Example:
We make Kodak digital cameras in three levels:
beginner, intermediate, and professional.
You-viewpoint:
Kodak makes cameras for you in three models:
basic, standard, and full-featured.
You-Viewpoint Illustrated
Even a bad-news situation can benefit from you-
viewpoint wording.
We cannot comply with your request to use our staff
on your project, for it would cost us more than we can
afford.
You-viewpoint: