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Overview
Role of adaptation in selecting words
Simplifying with short and familiar words
Appropriate use of technical words and acronyms
Selection of words with appropriate strength
Use of concrete words and active voice
Achieve clarity and precision by avoiding camouflaged
verbs, selecting the right words, and using idioms correctly.
Use of words that do not discriminate
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How to do it:
Visualize your readers
how they think
what they know
their education level
etc.
See example
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SUGGESTIONS FOR
SELECTING WORDS
Select words that have clear and correct meanings in
the reader’s mind.
SUGGESTIONS
Support simplicity in writing. Why?
Many people tend to write at a difficult level.
Quote of Winston Churchill “little men use big words; big
men use little words.” Follow the example of big men.
Writer knows subject better than the reader
The results of research support simplicity
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Interrupt Hinder
Minimal Smallest
Modification Change
Proceed Go
Supersede Replace
Ultimate Last
Visualize Picture
Verification Proof
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We have found that this technique is Our research shows that 87 percent of
successful. those using this technique are successful.
Your department may hire some Your department may hire three new
new employees. stock clerks.
We will ship your order soon. We will ship the Moss No. 41 desk sets
you ordered October 12 by Arrow Freight
on October 15.
Each of the branch managers will Each of the branch managers will
receive a substantial pay raise. received a 15 percent pay raise.
This procedure requires a constant This process requires a constant
low temperature. temperature of 10 degrees centigrade.
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Cancellation of the order was made We canceled the order on the 12th.
on the 12th.
Elimination of the deficit was brought The change eliminated the deficit.
about by the change.
The management of this office is Ms. Brown manages this office.
conducted by Ms. Brown.
Distribution of the special equipment The safety officer distributed the
was accomplished by the safety special equipment.
officer.
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Suggestions for
Nondiscriminatory Writing
Discriminatory words: words that do not treat all people
equally and with respect.
Avoid Gender-Neutral pronouns by
rewording to eliminate the offending word,
making the reference plural, and
substituting a neutral expression (he or she, he/she,
s/he, you, one, person).
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Instead of Use
my girl my secretary
male nurse nurse
male secretary secretary
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Race
A generous Jew
a hard-working African-American
Neatly dressed Hispanic man
Age
Senior citizens, old person,
teenagers
Disability
deaf and dumb
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